could you make this into i stroy i really like it and would like to see more of this reationship develop since its so diffrent from most demon "fruk" stroys

This is good, but you do know if someone is speaking, you are meant to put speech marks around what they are saying.

amazing! Can you make an sequel rated T to show how arthur and francis fall in love

Oh wow! This was really good, I loved it! I'm a huge supporter of Britianic AngelXFrance, and this was really good! Good job, can't wait to see more from you!