This story is so moving, I almost cried! It's one of the best fanfics I've EVER read! _

One word. Beautiful :)

You are a great writer, and I don't think you re rusty at all!

awwwww what a sad but beautiful story ! liked it ! plz write more you're very talented ! :3

i loved it..

it was really awesome..

hope u can create more graylu fanfics:)

Considering that you haven't written anything for a long time, this fic is pretty amazing. Despite its length, you've been able to do much justice with the respective characterization of everyone and the plot is also relatively interesting. I really do wish you write more often for this fandom. I'm actually excited to read more works from you :)

Only one chapter... oh well. This was beautifully written! I absolutely loved the scene where Gray made her the flying fish xD That was freaking cute!

Wonderfully written! Great job!

Wow! Can't believe this is your first. :)

It was definitely well-written. Kyaaaaa! GraLu FTW!

Anyway, it was so sweet... yet sad. I feel bad for Natsu, that was... uh, totally painful! , But reality bites hard.

Ooooh, gosh! Gray's totally hot in here. (Not in the pervy way, alright?) I mean, kyaaaaa! How he dealt with Lucy made me swoon over him. Lucky Lucy! ~,~ now I'm all dreamy!

Please write more GrayxLucy fics. _

Keep up the good work!

i felt so sorry for natsu... but i love graylucy moment very much... thanks for writing this story

was lucy and natsu in a realationship or somthing and i love it 3

This was your first fanfiction? That was amazing! It was like you've written hundreds before. I loved it, it was deep and loving. Interesting back story too.

Actually this story is, in what I know by far, not considered as rated m,, but of course, for you to be sure, you'll rate it as M,, hehe,

This is a great story, I can feel the hurt, the comfort and, most of all, I can feel the love,, the love that Gray and Lucy share for each other, the love that Natsu has for Lucy, the love Lucy knew she had for Natsu, that is brotherly love, the friendship love that they all have for each other,, it's so sad and touching, but I still love it,,

I'm not a Nalu fan, but I felt sorry for Natsu,, I know he's hurt, but that's just part of being in love,, hurt is something you'll encounter when you love someone,, And I mean all kinds of love,, hehe, knowing that the one you love is happy, you'll do every means just for him/her to remain happy,, am I right? I'm not at all experience when it comes to love, but I myself fell in love, because I'm human, and humans are expected to love, even if you are the meanest and the worst person alive,,

I'm a overly obsessed Gralu fan, so I love what you did! :) everything was perfect and in its right places,, hey, you should change the rating to T because most readers never read stories when its rated m,, just saying,, you'll gain more readers in doing this I think,, hehe, well I want others to read this, because its is so good,, and I mean that!

Anyways, you did great! You're an awesome writer! You should write more cause you have the capacity of doing great and amazing stories,,

keep the good work up and I hope to see more from you!

GANBATTE