I’m sorry about the scathing review I left earlier. I get really pissed at bad grammar, so I wrote that. Tbh, my favorite fics are Pertemis fics. Once again, really sorry.

I absolutely loved your story! This is about the 5th time that I’m reading it and every single time, I laugh at how Saphira says “I beat the Apollo cabin on archey!” It’s hilarious. I love, love, love, love, love your story. Please keep writing.

I am crying!

I swear I cried!

It's times like these that I don't understand my emotions

Man you have my reepects great story... Rick Rioden might have died of jealousy

good chapter sorry but i haugh to (friendship)

I have absolutely no idea why I have continued reading through this piece. However, I feel that I should point something out to you. Annabeth, as the daughter of Athena, naturally has wisdom. Despite her fatal flaw of hubris, she is not nearly STUPID enough to provoke beings more powerful than herself, immortal or not. So why would you paint her character in this way? It makes no sense.

You need, and I can't stress this enough, a beta.

Honestly, I just reached this last chapter, and I have to say, this is one of my favorite fan fiction story's I have ever read even if it's uncompleted. Despite the occasional misspellings and grammar errors, the plot is amazing and I love the description. If you have completed the story, (and you read this review) then please tell me where I can finish reading it. If you haven't finished this story, please do, if only just for me. I know I'm just a stranger but it would make me happy to see a proper ending. Thank you :)

It was pretty good. You should have lemon though.

WHAT THE FREAKING FUCK!

PARTAY!

OH FUCK!

WHAT?!