I really loved the parallelism in this chapter. You showed how perfectly matched that are for each other! There are a few typos, but otherwise it was very beautifully done!

This was a beautyful story!
I loved it and it made me almost cry.
I loved how Kyo began to accept the curse and the love story between him a Tohru was very sweet. You also thought of discribing the change in everyone, which was a great idea!
The change within Akito was a little to fast for my liking, but well... It made the story more interesting, didn't it?
Keep up this great work and thank you for this masterpiece.

-Loki94

Don't worry I'm crazy too!

Amazing. Love it! XD

I read this chapter while listening to the light behind your eyes by my chemical romance and I feel like it fit really well, especially with Tohru's goodbye :)

So beautiful...its indescrible the emotions this story made me feel...!

Joy...sadness...every emotion a person can feel, i felt it reading this...thank you so very much.

LIFELESS? NOOOO...

Still i cry as i read this...sad beauty

omg i'm crying as i read this...!

i'll have to check the other story out, i don't watch / read it but my bf does read / watch Full Metal Alch. XD

That's how i met my boyfriend too...seven years happy and still going!
This story is so beautiful, omg...i don't want it to end!

Such a good story! What a mysterious chapter!

please please please tellm me Torhu or Kyo dies...
(-.-)

This is such a sweet story!

omg omg omg! This story is too good!

Life is too precious, do not destroy it. Life is life, fight for it.
So very inspiring!