Great story, I am enjoying your 1 shots thank you for writing.

the boys should just give in lol.

It's a good thing all those spirits trained Harry. As well as Dumbles sister telling Harry all Dumbles dirty little secrets. The old goat f***er should've trained Harry as soon as he started school! Great short story Sheltie! I'm currently reading Harry Potter and His Three Wives Plus. It's an interesting read to say the least.

so in the end all you wanted to show how great harry was that only he has to go into limbo and become powerful like some superhero and having a harem like those muslims in middle east mission accomplished

Take that, Dumbledore!

S-N-E-A-K-Y! *EVIL LAUGH*

A bit quick and choppy in places but I like the idea.

enjoyed reading this chapter

Awesome story.

There was a reason why I avoided your other stories after sampling some of your work but this one made that fact quite clear to me again. If you call this good enough you will never ever manage to produce something readable. This is a rushed through POS not worth being published, clear enough?

thanks for using my sugestion

you took the idea and did it more than justice.

love the read.

and that you left what tracey and susan's decissions up to th imagination of the reader as a nice touch.

think i sugested cho with ron. in hind sight lavander is a better fit

thanks

interesting twist for the ministry battle...

love that Harry didnt have to suffer through the classical 6th and 7th year...

nice ending and amusing too _

Thanks for the story. It is becoming quite common for Harry to die, visit his dead relatives and others, then come back to stomp on Voldemort and Dumbledore.

poor Ariana having a disgrace gay brother after her father being a bastard everything went wrong with bastard son of the family great story

i will be hoenst it is not your greatest but i still enjoyed reading it my freind.

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