The way you spell Cmon is how you spell common, like Common room and such

And thus Roxel was born an they lived happily ever after.

P.S. Great story.

No matter how gay someone is there are two people that are the gayest gay that ever gayed and they are Xemnas(His name anagrams into Mansex what else is there to say?) and Marluxia(He has PINK hair, a PINK weapon, and his super power is FLOWER POWER need I say more?).

P.S. I don't mean to offend any gay people.

1. Gaara WTF!
2. Luxord joining Roxas doesn't surprise me because "Lux" means light in Latin I think.
3. Luxord was always my favorite Organization 13 member. GO LUXORD!

I am slightly scared of Mansex(Xemnas) now.

P.S. His name spells mansex. XD

This story is great so far though I feel bad for him because his 'family jewels' were shattered into 1,000,000,000,000 pieces.

Keep up the great work.

Great chapters.

P.S. You're welcome Gaara.

This is me reviewing so Gaara won't be stranded in the middle of a country.

Great chapter.

Great story! Really liked it. :)
The only thing I want to say besides that is that you should have shortened the last few chapters. It was going a but slow, bit besides that good story. (I know you wrote this aa year ago by still wanted to review).

WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU!? -_-

Woo! Soulless ginger's for the win!

anyway, real curious as to how this battle is going to turn out. God Xigbar was such a creeper XD twas great.

Also, hooray for plot development!

Why is it that I'm the only one whose reviewed this so far? BAH!

Anyway, a bit confused at why the portal is rejecting Roxas. But I'm sure we'll find out eventually!

I'm sure you've already gotten my request for Gaara, so there's that-

I too am wondering why Roxas is the clueless one, though I have my suspicions..:D

DA DA DA DAAAAAAAA~

You got a return reviewer! These strange creatures will return to your stories new chapters and leave reviews until the end! They can only be used in this story, however.

Okay, first of all, LOVE the story! Its interesting and I love how you've portrayed everyone. Despite the fact that Astrid annoys me a bit with her lecturing Roxas. Hooray for Axel! Man I love that pyrokinetic.

Also, since when does Gaara have a soul? Hes a ginger. He traded his soul for awesome hair.

By the way, I'm curious as to what your backstage looks like. Mines nothing real special...just a chair and a desk with my kindle and a bunch of art stuff...I really should get some decorating skills. Do you think Marluxia would do it?