#im not crying your crying

I love these stories and how you portray all of the Links personalities! I wish I had found this sooner!

This is my favourite so far, I love how you show the bonds between all links, but the hero of time and the hero of twilight bond just feels extra special.

And then, an angry fangirl dropped from the sky and murdered Dark Time! How dare he touch my favorite Link! ;)

Aww Skys big brother, the heros spirit, is so sweet. I wish there was a chapter of his introduction to the others, and how they would react to his sad life. But I have a question, is he fused to the triforce of courage that Sky brings to the Goddessess each time a hero dies or is he something or somewhere else?

Daww, that was really cute. I really like the Trails - especially Sky's :3 Can't wait for more!

Rather... Emotional, I could say. However, I've now noticed how short these chapters really are. They wouldn't translate into a book very well. Doesn't seem well paced so far.

Well typed(mostly) with a good reference/following of the Legend of Zelda: MM Grief Theory. I thoroughly enjoy the characters already, named after what they did in their previous lives, though I feel that the audience enjoying this series will be limited due to the knowledge about the LoZ franchise needed to understand some of their actions that will be coming up.

I should not have reread that today. Dammit Queenie you made me literally cry! Ugh Light poor baby T.T I won't be able to listen to the Ballad of the Windfish for weeks now. Or play Link's Awakening

Wow, Miss Queenie! You've outdone yourself! I know that Time has gone through alot of stuff and all, but deep down, he took charge and destroyed that shadow.
I just love this particular Trial the most, even though I love Sky the most!

Aww, poor Sky. (Pats him on the head)
It's okay, the Spirit will come back soon, in fact, sooner than you think! (the new Zelda game *fangirl squeal*) I hope...

I love this chapter the most by far! How you wrote the interactions between the heroes, just beautiful! It made me smile so much!

*sniff* Chapter 20 made me cry.
Poor Twilight. Poor Sky.

Poor Time.

Hm will you ever do a chapter with Time and the various masks he had to wear? Including the Fierce Diety's? By the way if you can't tell my favorite is Time. Can't wait to see where it goes.

You know, I just realized why the dark counterpart of Twilight acted like this; its because you wrote them like this in the main series where Sky dreams about the heroes dark sides! Very clever. (Or am I just stupid that I realized this right now? )
Im guessing that the third Trial will be the remaining one ?

I dont know why, but Im thinking his trial would be about...
Ah, never mind. I will keep that to myself. I dont want to spoil it in case my hunch was right.
Anyway, great chapter! I love it!

8PPPP
I guess no Dark Link/TP Link yaoi for us today! LOLO