| Reviews for Harry Potter and his New Beginning |
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   csheila chapter 16 . 11h Great set up. Thanks for sharing a great story. If you one day return, great. If not don’t worry. Life is a journey. Hope you are safe and well |
| csheila chapter 15 . 7/28 Loved the others’s acceptance. Mania was exhausting. But they throw a nice spin into plot. Looking forward to mystery thief |
| csheila chapter 14 . 7/28 Great cliffie. Nice job updating the other three. But check the first chapter 1 about disclosure restrictions. If there, edit out |
| csheila chapter 13 . 7/28 Hmm, I thought they couldn’t tell anyone |
| csheila chapter 12 . 7/28 Terrific set of canon changes. Loved Draco in this chapter. Still wondering about Snape |
| csheila chapter 11 . 7/28 Very nice change up to Canon. Great and (probably) realistic description of Azbakan. Same for Sirius transformation |
| csheila chapter 10 . 7/28 You did a fabulous job with holidays. Brilliant set of descriptions. Loved interactions with Draco |
| csheila chapter 9 . 7/28 Okay punishment for Dursley’s make sense. Time to go after Albus not to mention Sirius |
| csheila chapter 8 . 7/28 Wow. What happened to Dudley? Seems harsh but I don’t care. As you described it they whipped a small child. But again Dudley was still young. Anyway, i am being wimpy. |
| csheila chapter 7 . 7/28 Good job. But all the making out isn’t going to get them in trouble. Can’t remember if you tell parents. You must ALWAYS watch Molly |
| csheila chapter 6 . 7/28 Can’t believe HHr forgot about the portraits |
| csheila chapter 5 . 7/28 He is a prick. Don’t worry about it. Some might think school wouldn’t allow serious dueling. But the place is a joke. |
| csheila chapter 4 . 7/28 Like it. Hate to see Ron there but they will have to deal. They a,so need to be more careful since walls have ears. |
| csheila chapter 3 . 7/28 Like it. Surprised he got away as easily. But Hagrid always liked him. Normally I ignore typos. But I don’t think you meant to say “soul” beneficiary of will. Or did you? |
| csheila chapter 2 . 7/28 Love it. Realistic responses all around. He needs something besides foreshadowing so Occulmency makes sense. Like the characterizations |
