Oh snap! English isn't your first language?! Good lordie lou then, you are spot on, better than 85, 90% of native speakers. I had no idea!

On a note relating to the story itself, Miranda/Shep isn't really something I normally get interested in, but I thought 'hey why not' I'm at a calm spot; finally not in the middle of anything else, and after reading this first installment, I gotta admit, I'm curious to see where this one goes. I wasn't really expecting Liara to actually be anything of a contender, which tends to make pulling this off a little harder for me ;p

Pretty funny.
Miranda forever justifying her interest in Shepard with professional concerns, while being jealous of everybody around Shepard was hilarious. Not that she didn't have good reason, oh my, Shepard was quite busy for a while...
Good thing Shepard has those cybernetic implants, otherwise she might have died of alcohol poisoning along the way.
I liked how Miranda kept on saying one thing while thinking something different altogether.
I have to say though that I have a hard time believing that Liara could outfox EDI and hack the cameras on the Normandy.

Still a great story.

... omg shep is such a whore. Lol makes me laugh with each chapter. Time to keep reading

Amusing story, though I feel bad for Liara and Jack, even though I've never been Jack's biggest fan. Thanks for the story!

I almost forgot to review this story ;) You know, you're a sadist. My forehead hurts because of you. Well, mainly because of innumerable facepalms xD I had such a FUN while reading this story! Even I'm about to say that you're since that moment my favourite forein (I'm from Poland) fanfiction autor!

I love the way you create characters and I love the way you make sentences and generally I love all the ways! You've made me very, very happy today :)

But, what I wanted to say, I very liked the idea of Shepard flirting with almoust everyone and Miranda getting so jelous The whole story was just great and there was only one small thing that I really didn't like - it was definitely to short! ;P But it was amazing. Really, really amazing. Thank you for this story :)

Greatings,

Ines

I have now read all of your Miranda/shepard stories and I must say, "wow." I love it. So much fun watching how you accurately portray Miranda's cold cutting exterior met with the romanticism of falling in love with female Shepard. This story ends perfectly rolling into the next story. Excited for future updates.

Miranda has so TOTALLY earned it. Man, that poor girl, and holy hell, Shep is..like...a little horn dog. ;)

"I'm not sure you should be climbing furniture in your state, Ms. Lawson," totally made me fall off my chair laughing.

hahahaha love the mental image you gave me of Miranda hammering at the elevator controls as Kelly is moving in slow motion, her arms all spread out prepared to embrace her. lmao

yeah, i was like; hey! My shep ain't ugly! then i killed her. ;)

eeeeeeeeeep! the tension building up. although admittedly, it's nice Shep gets to be a little jealous as well. ;)

"Is that an asari dancer outfit?"

best line ever! *snicker*

Hahahaha! This fic completely cracks me up. It seriously makes me LOL. Just the way you portray Miranda is fantastic. Absolutely LOVE this fic. Can't wait to read more. :)

Ah, got to love a pissed off Miranda! I always knew her normally reserved coolness hid a some sort of raging jealousy!

Ha, you have no idea how much that sneak peak made me laugh. I have yet to meet someone who actually likes Diana Allers...

I think I like jealous Miranda almost as much as badass Miranda :D