Why did whoever-the-heck-they-are take Glados and Caroline? What for? ORDER FROM WHO TO DO WHAT AND WHY?! I NEED ANSWERS! #annoyingplothole

i need more1

the whole hallie is a person thing made me think of
vocaloids

You just started a new AU! A multichapter of this would be AMAZING!

This was a really touching story. I really wish you'd continue it though. Does Chell get Glados out?

I enjoyed this read. It was an interesting alternate universe. Well-written, too. Events were clear and I didn't get lost at all.

I like how despite Chell being adopted, she and her little sister still have such a strong bond. It shows that blood isn't everything. Cake is everything. But this is not about cake. I also like how Glados befriended 'Hallie' before becoming one with her, as GLaDOS is now, plus Caroline.

And I agree; GLaDOS is very cute as a little sister. But I still think her homicidal robot overlord self is the cutest.

:( Poor Glados... D':

*Surger rush*DO MORE!DOMOREDOMOREDoMOREDOMOREDOMO REDOMOREDOMOREDOMORE!

:D awesome, as usual

This fic is really awesome. Please continue this shortly as I really do want to know what will happen in the next chapter.

Yet another awesome story.

Well done, Feep. You have officially managed to-hold on a sec. Sorry- *wipes eyes* your ending has me crying. ARRGHHH! OH DARN YOU TEAR DUCTS! *Punches tears away* ANYWAY, This was a really cute story, and you managed to show how Glados and Chell deep down have a good relationship, and also it makes sense! I love the way you put the universe of Portal into clear words. NICE!

I love this! It is so... Emotional and sweet! So Chell realizes that GLaDOS is her sister while on the elevator going out of the facility?

wow! I love how you've worked out the story! (TBH I never would of managed to get it all to make sence -.-') cant wait for the next chapter!

Very good, once again. The end was very good, but it did feel incomplete. You should cease your one-shotting and actually do something :)

Sadness...but awesome. I like it.