Wuah! Cruel Muraki! /
Great work! Is there next chap? I'd love to read next chap*if it's there* xDDDD

This was a good story I really liked it. I thought that there were somethings that don't really need to be there but it was still good to me also I like your writing style. X3

This was amazing. :D

Really, you have Muraki down pat. I could see all of this as if it was actually happening in the anime, and it probably would have, had Hisoka not interrupted.

Great job, majour kudos, this really was quite good.

KYA! I loved it so much! PLEASE write a sequel to it! you left me wanting more. Also, if I might add, I love your style of writing. It was almost like I was actually there. 3 Amazing job! Keep up the wonderful work!

Beautifully written, your style is amazing, I was hanging on every word. Loved the little detail and thoughts you added, this was truly like diving into the doctor's mind and seeing through his eyes. Awesome stuff.

Aw. Usually I don't like first-person POV fics, but this is pretty good. Poor Muraki. XD;

Oh, that was good...

Ne, continue! It's starting to get interesting... Want to see Tsu-kun give in to Mu-kun *very* willingly... hehehe
~dna-chan .

_ Muraki's being a gentleman! Heheh...

I hope Tsuzuki goes back to Muraki eventually. Write a sequel, please?

~fd97

I really like your story, you gave Muraki actual emation that didn't revolve around him only! (unlike many stories I've read...*sigh*... and he's such a COOL character!)Are you going to be writting more on this one, or are you going to keep it a one shot? Could you email me and tell me? Thanks!

sierra

Oh, love, love, love. Possibly one of the few decent Muraki/Tsuzuki fics around...

I love this story! The poker game between Muraki and Tsuzuki is one of my favorite scenes. Please say there's going to be a sequal!

I'm not sure what to say except 'wow.' This fic was truly amazing, I love it

Brilliant! This was a really interesting twist on the famous poker episode, and I loved your descriptions. Good job!

I say you add Hisoka in there too! There are never enough yaoi threesomes :( Anyway, keep writing, or i'm going to DIE. Not really, but it's very good, I wanna read more!