Reviews for Hidden in Sight
keed chapter 3 . 7/21
come on update please.. this is a good story. and still waiting for a update
Guest chapter 4 . 7/17
carry this on it was getting good
monsterkillers124 chapter 4 . 7/1
Are you still doing stories or are you giving up on them
Naruto Kurenai F chapter 1 . 6/10
Plot fix How is Kakashi the third Strongest if he is an A rank and Kurenai is a S rank by your standards.
Silverman1212 chapter 2 . 7/7/2019
damn i really didnt like that she went out with asuma , i know from her side it was only like friendly outs but still i feel uncomfortable , also there is no need for that , she can tell him she is not interested no need to tell about naruto to him and that was really bad to asuma , like they are playing him and i dont see them doing that . .anyway i really didnt like that at all , i dont think i can keep reading but you said you plan to rewrite this ? i hope when you do you will take out the whole asuma thing , he can still be mad at naruto even if he did not go out with kurenai . other than that this was a really good fic , too bad cant read anymore because of that . will be waiting for the rewrite .when you do rewrite it please update this with a note , to let us know .
Silverman1212 chapter 1 . 7/7/2019
awesome first chapter and story , it has everything i like , godlike naruto , characters depth , cool naruto and i like the pairing . overall so far loved it . please come back to this , i know its been 7 years but i still hope you do .
Sir Naru chapter 1 . 12/17/2018
Update good sir
Sir Naru chapter 1 . 12/17/2018
update good sir
gabelou1991 chapter 4 . 7/14/2018
J'aime beaucoup.
gabelou1991 chapter 2 . 7/14/2018
J'ai. J'en aimé ce chapitre de la réaction de asuma qui a fait comme quelque de normal .

Le problème d'hinata est sa confiance, car en canon elle attendu pratiquement 8 pour lui dire ce qu'elle ressent, est-ce qu'on peut s'imaginer que Naruto en8 ans et un déjà avoir une copine ? Pour moi la réponse est simple est un grand oui.

J'aime bien qu'anko pense que elle et Naruto sont des âmes sœurs , est-ce que cela va être un trio ? Où plus?
Guest chapter 4 . 6/10/2018
I'm said that this hasn't updated in 6yrs I wish it didn't end
LokiTheSabertooth chapter 1 . 11/9/2017
what just happen?. you had one wild and sick mind. what kind of sane person let a ten year old married somene double his own age. but other than that you got a great story
Monster King chapter 4 . 8/20/2017
Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it so soon into the story.
icedshadows chapter 4 . 8/12/2017
can you say if is adop? please.
DF.K.Kotaku chapter 4 . 4/22/2017
Type your review ,pls,pls...continue the story i am full into it pls i beg you pls...
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