Reviews for Beta Orionis
Kelana-ti chapter 45 . 5/6
I loved this story and it's prequel. :) I was really sad when Regulus died, but Rigel made up for it. He is absolutely adorable. For a teenager.

I do feel like I might have missed something? I was expecting a grand reveal about who Rigel's dad was, then after the battle people started referring to him and his mom as Blacks. People who I thought were not in the know (Holly, her family, Rigel's friends) didn't react to it. Did the family tell everyone at some point?
Purplestan chapter 10 . 3/11/2017
I love this story and everything but it seems to be based around rigel and I find it so annoying.
Purplestan chapter 3 . 3/11/2017
Yes Sirius
Purplestan chapter 2 . 3/11/2017
Gonna get confused with all these names. I already don't know who grace is.
Purplestan chapter 1 . 3/11/2017
Interesting. Was she married to regulus if so why isn't she called black?
peanutbutterjamjellyyy chapter 44 . 11/3/2012
I really liked how the sequel turned out and how Severus got his happy ending
kycatsfan chapter 44 . 10/30/2012
I absolutely loved it. I actually haven't read the prequel, but I will definitely be reading it soon. This story was everything I could have hoped for. You did a great job with the characters and bringing out a side of Severus that we didn't get to see in cannon. I was a little freaked by Sev torturing Rigel, and I sort of felt that even with the apology there wasn't enough closure, but I think some of that was just coming from my own feelings rather than what the characters would have felt. Also my only real criticism would be that Rigel acts much younger than he is at times. I've never been through a war or really seen there effects on people, but I would have thought that would have made him more solom or something, because he isn't really immature, just really hyper and bouncy. Like I said I don't really know that much about it and I don't think his character was unbelievable or anything, it was jsut something i noticed, so I thought I'd put it in here.
Anyway, great story. I can't wait to read your others.
FonzFan chapter 44 . 9/17/2012
What a wonderful story! Enjoyed every minute of it! Hoping for a sequel? :)
Tessia chapter 44 . 9/17/2012
Hi...Well nice end. I just expected you to write also epilogue... Ten years after or so...
Etoile Black chapter 42 . 8/31/2012
Perfect as always!
M.M chapter 38 . 8/19/2012
Whoa whoa this was such a good chapter!
Etoile Black chapter 36 . 8/16/2012
I meant to say - I don't want Fred, Tonks and Remus to die - again :(
I'm ready though and I hope Rigel and Holly can get a bit closer as soon as the war is over and that you will write about it :)
Etoile Black chapter 37 . 8/16/2012
*sob* I don't want Fred, T
Vix chapter 34 . 8/8/2012
Wow, intense. I love your updates...I always get to the end and wish they were longer. Update soon please. I hope Lenna and Sev come to some sort of understanding...they're both hurting. But Go Rigel!
Etoile Black chapter 34 . 8/8/2012
I'm so proud of Rigel!
I feel sorry for Snape knowing he is fighting for the light and receiving no recognition :(
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