| Reviews for The Surprise |
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   theDowntonAbbeyfreak chapter 13 . 7/2 Simply wonderful! Thank you for writing this. |
| NEGirl chapter 13 . 4/29 A fun read! In ch 3 you questioned whether or not to do steamy writing again. Well, years down we know what decision you made! |
| Anna chapter 13 . 6/28/2018 Just lovely. Warm and comfy. Love it. |
| Chelsietx chapter 13 . 5/21/2018 OK, I’m a few years late reviewing this. I read it once before I created an account. Anyway, this was wonderful. I’m so glad they agreed to “the plan” because it just makes sense for Elsie and Charles to be grandparents. Thank you! |
| Baron Munchausen chapter 13 . 5/22/2013 Very, very lovely. Everyone lives happily ever after, just for once. Thank you, Lady Kouw. |
| Baron Munchausen chapter 11 . 5/22/2013 Sentimental? Perhaps. Beautiful? Definitely. Do we want more? Absolutely! |
| Baron Munchausen chapter 10 . 5/22/2013 Oh this is all so very entertaining and lovely and gorgeous! I think you've got all the characters very well and given them all some really fun things to do and say. (And I claim my choccy cookie.) |
| Baron Munchausen chapter 6 . 5/22/2013 *squeak* I mean, what a lovely chapter. |
| Baron Munchausen chapter 4 . 5/22/2013 Poor Anthony! But he loves to do things for Edith. On behalf of all the Anthony/Edith shippers, thank you for treating them so well. I think the whole of this story is so sweet and fluffy; I don't know why you didn't write before! |
| BrittanyLS chapter 7 . 4/18/2013 Beautiful! |
| Lady Andith chapter 1 . 4/8/2013 This is such a good story and you are such a good writer, i really liked that you wrote in Edith and Anthony; i have just gotten into Elsie and Charles's storys and i can not wait to read more. so keep up the good work and i also liked the kathleen called Elsie and Charles Grandma and Grandpa. TTFN |
| Hope chapter 13 . 6/12/2012 This was the best fan fiction story about carson and hughes I have ever read. I love happy endings and everything else from the beginning ,the middle to the end. Please continue writing because you are truly gifted. |
| BootRat chapter 13 . 5/21/2012 This was yet another excellent story, well done :) I only recently started reading Elsie/Charles fics, and by recently I mean yesterday xD. I shipped them from the start but never got around to reading any of their stories. Despite my short time reading stories about them, all of yours are my favourites, this one especially. So thank you for writing excellent stories and for getting me completely hooked on yet another ship! |
| Maple Fay chapter 13 . 4/13/2012 I know I'm terribly late, but ever since the Easter break my reading skills seemed to have deteriorated terribly. Will you ever forgive me? I just caught up with the last three updates, and I'm suddenly very warm, hot even, cozy and ridiculously happy. You gave everyone a wonderful closure, with love and accomplishment flourishing... and as for Charles and Elsie's wedding night, I won't say a thing about it, because yes, HOT is the operative word. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us! |
| griseldalafey chapter 13 . 4/11/2012 75! *just kidding* This conclusion was lovely, I love happy endings. Elsie and Charles as doting grandparents are adorable. |
