Reviews for Eye of the Black Dragon
Guest chapter 4 . 5/28
I'm so glad that NaLi isn't going to be a ship in this.
irmacamila2007 chapter 29 . 5/22
Nel the more power the better 'v'
Saptok Dasgupta chapter 71 . 5/14
If you said you had abandoned it, why would people check for updates?
Saptok Dasgupta chapter 66 . 5/14
Earlier, I would support you whole heartedly if you made it either NaLu or NaZa, but I dunno, after this chapter, I'm kinda feeling a brother-sister vibe between Erza and Natsu. I mean, it is your fabfic, and I will definitely read it, whatever you choose to do. Its just my opinion. Or you could edit this chapter a bit, without changing the story, to make their relationship a bit less brother-sister, if you decide to pai them up.
Saptok Dasgupta chapter 64 . 5/14
Wow
Saptok Dasgupta chapter 62 . 5/14
Gray can create water out of thin air, because air has water vapour. And it is logical that tmperature magic means both giving and taking away heat.
Saptok Dasgupta chapter 59 . 5/14
Your readers will never stop reading. Yo are an amazing writer, and we will stick with you through and through.
Saptok Dasgupta chapter 57 . 5/14
Don't you mean nails against chalkboard?
Saptok Dasgupta chapter 52 . 5/14
You did satisfy both the shippers. That was mostly because, as a NaLu shipper, until I read your author's note, I didn't even realize that Erza said she was happy when Natsu came, and not Lucy. I had to read it again.
Saptok Dasgupta chapter 47 . 5/14
I thin I wrote this same thing before, but making a character OP in a fanfic does not make it boring. It makes the reader's face create a wide smile, that stays even if you try to get a straight face.
Saptok Dasgupta chapter 16 . 5/13
In the actual anime, an overpowered hero is disappointing, but in a fanfic, overpowered characters make the readers face break out in a wide smile.
Saptok Dasgupta chapter 3 . 5/13
It was amazing, especially his show of power, although the fight could have been better, if he had managed to pin down erza with next to no effort, and scared her, instead of just punching her. But still, its great!
evanonymous chapter 3 . 4/26
...so Natsu is kidnapped and forced to join against his will despite being strong enough to literally walk away any time before that; then comes back the next day after beating Gray and Erza easily, WANTING to join with his reason being "to get stronger"? What kind of crackpot shit is this
ajplexi chapter 1 . 4/25
NALU even Mashima ships them
Guest chapter 21 . 4/16
Nalu nalu nalu nalu nalu nalu nalu nalu nalu nalu Naluuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!
ill leave if no nalu
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