I found your fic yesterday and once I started reading it, I could not stop. I really hope this is not the end... I want to see how they escape Silent Hill and how Heather handles both Valtiel and Samael in the outside world. Really want to see how Samael develops into more of an individual and less of a monster.

More story, please?

I continue to reread this story from time to time, and check for updates every few months. And every time I read it, it's always one of the most enjoyable fan stories I've read, not to mention long.

I hope the story and muse for it hasn't been abandoned, but if it has, what's already here is absolutely amazing, and I can at least somewhat speculate on what will happen next and how it will end.

Thank you for the story, you've put a lot of heart and care into it, and it shows.

PLEASE write some more it is a beautiful work

PLS UPDATE SOON! Such a good story

I don't usually comment, since english isn't my first language, but after re-reading this story twice I decided to finally write down my thoughts. Firstly: THANK YOU for writing such great fic! Silent Hill isn't even my fandom, since I prefer horror books rather than games, but I started reading this story and just couldn't stop. All characters are wonderfully written, everybody is dealing diffrently with their traumatic pasts and memories from their Silent Hill "trials". Heather is great, she really seems like more adult version of her in SH2, while still being a snarky badass. I really liked Alex, and definitely didn't expect him to get murdered! And then sort-of come back as weirdly adorable, while still being murderous, Piramid Head! The whole plot of Heather having more power than everybody, even gods of Silent Hill, expected, is absolutely amazing. Xuchibara wanting to kill her and also being kind of worried that she may actually DIE is hilarous, and I have my own suspicions why perhaps her smell calms him and his avatars down. Laura being the magnet for fanatical cultists is also great, and you actually got me invested in both her bond with Walter and now with Sergiei the very polite ninja. I'm really thankful to you for writing this fic. It made me laugh, it made me sad, it made me go "oh my!". It is rare for me to get so immersed in stories, and if this was a book, I would buy it to keep it on my shelf to come back to it again and again. I hope you'll someday come back to this story to finish it, though honestly I would be satisfied even with just plot outline how you planned for this story to go forward. Again - your writing made me very happy. Thank you!

Still love this store after all this time. Every time you add a new chapter I re-read the whole thing. I love this store and can't wait till it's finished but just wanted to know you still have someone that is waiting for this store to continue :)

I actually started reading this in my freshman year of highschool and funnily enough I actually did a book report of this fic. I kept reading this instead of the book I had picked so when the time came to write the report I panicked and just picked this! I changed the names of the characters but I pretty much did a paper about how people cope with their “inner monsters”. I later got an A on that paper. I hadn’t looked at this fic in years and I think caught up till Alex’s ‘death’ so imaging my surprise when I see that’s theres like 30 more chapters! Anyway long story short I just re-read this whole thing in like 3 days and I hope Heather kicks ass all the way to the end!

I've read this fix three times now since finding it and I love, love, LOVE what you've created! I love how spunky and almost nonchalant Heather is when interacting with the monsters of Silent Hill, but it's not at all Mary Sue-ish. She can still get freaked out, and terrified by what happens, she's just so believeable. I love putting myself in her shoes and figuring out what she might do next.
And just how well developed your version of Silent Hill is and how it works and how the monsters and people work in it! And how the previous survivors react and just, this story! All three times I've read this, I've practically cried at the scene where Valtiel is taken from Heather, I love that twitchy boogieman so much!
Please, please, PLEASE update this soon! I know it's been some time now but there's still so much left undone, Travis and James are captured, Edwin and Xipe are still alive, so many questions about Heather and the Red and Yellow God's left unanswered! there's still so much left, I need more!

Riveting, Pulse-pounding, Spine-tingling, Mind-bending, Thought-provoking, and Supremely Sensational!

The threads are now being spun together, A tapestry is seen taking shape!

I’ve been following this fic for years now and I trully hope we see the end of it huhuhhuhu I LOVE THIS AND YOU SO MUCH! It’s been ages since the last update but im still hoping. I trully love your work, definitely my most favprite fanfic ever

Rereading this fic for the ... second? time. Maybe the third. Didn't find it that long ago, either.

I can picture this like another cut scene, and imagine Heather's voice in my head. Valtiel's noises are harder, but they would be. :p

I cannot over-emphasize how much I would love to know what was going through Valtiel's head during the first chapters, before things get all ... Silent Hill-y.

This fanfic is wonderfully written, you have each respective character-monster or human their own amount of depth and have good timing for comedic moments, if you can, I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

This fanfiction is absolutely amazing, I LOVE how much depth you added to Laura's character.

OMG, I can't believe how much I came to love Walter, it hurts to not know what happened to him, I was so shipping him with Laura. And it was so sad...
I like Sergei a lot too, and if it turns out that Walter is not dead and still retains his memories (blueberry pancakes with cream) it will be so funny to see them all together. Laura isn't a half God like Heather but is admirable for herself, from side character you made her become a vital part of the story, if she were to ever die everybody would just fall down. She is much more than the comic relief, she became part of the very soul of the plot, and everytime someone is in danger they almost always think of her.
Thank you for developing Laura like this. And it is so funny how all these loyal cultists just fall in her lap!

Not to say I don't love Heather or Valtiel (the three are my favorite characters of the story).

I hope that everything will end up well, like Heather with Alex Samael and Valtiel and Laura with her two husbands ex-cultists (they could start a weird satanic club with blind ninjas and black sludge throwing knives with a fantastic head who knows how to takle people and bitting their face off). That would be awesome, and maybe Travis with a house, because seriously , he is getting old.

I know that life is important, but please update this fantastic story soon! Please!

Oh my goodness! This fic is the best thing I've ever read! Seriously lol I adore long stories such as this that keep me glued to my screen :D I actually cried when Alex died it was just so sad, also when his ghost died. But I just love his monster version to pieces! At first I loved Valtiel... actually I still love him! And wanted Heather to seriously romance him lol but darn it I was crushed when you rejected this couple I was like noooo lol oh! After you complete this story, which you absolutely must complete! Please consider giving valtiel some romantic love. I've searched through fanfiction and archive of our own to which there is nothing! It's so sad as I love him lol I've read a few on here but nowhere near as lengthy and as awesome as this which at least features him! So yeah I'm dying for valtiel romance lol Im certain you could write a most awesome one! Oh and I loved how you portrayed Walter I actually thought him and Laura were gonna hook up lol but now I'm rooting for this Sergei! I just find their relationship so sweet even though he's a bad guy yeah lol I can't help it you made me like him! I hope he survives and gets unbrainwashed lol though that sentence got me thinking, that none of the monsters can see, this ninja guy is blind... Does he have something to to with that? I'm just grasping here lol valtiel seemed really protective of him even though it's not Heather's version of him but I've always thought that Valtiel was the "good" twin lol anyways I look forward to the next update!