I LOVE THIS. I always think Ash is underrated and this fic is absolutely awesome.

That was a great story about Ash :) Ash is one of my favorite characters and I could hear him telling the story in my head the whole time. Great job!

Oh wow. This is fantastic.

I really really love your take on Ash. This is beautiful building up of back story and creating the character that we saw for way too short a time on the show. You give him a really complex and believable background and the way you show how different people have had such an influence on his life is really wonderful. I like the characters you chose. They were all pretty awesome sounding and I liked them a lot. They were good influences on Ash, too, getting around his head when he continues to lie to himself.

The one at the end, though, was fabulous. I loved how you showed the beginning of the process where he got to completely manipulate heaven. And got to tell off the angel because... guess what? he really is a prodigy.

THIS IS AWESOME. I LOVE IT.

This is by and far the most unique thing I have read on this site. Thank you very much for putting your time and effort into this m'dear!

I really like the last few lines of the Ellen section.

Very few people write about Ash, and your story is pretty awesome It definitely gave his character more depth

Wheew. That was really well written, and an awesome story.