First, the grammar is terrible. Second, the story tends to get confusing and many details are left out. If this story were to be re-written with some minor changes and the grammar “fixed” I believe it could be something very intriguing. I would give this sorry a 3/5, mostly for a concept that I haven’t seen before.

I'm so in love with story! Hope you could upload the epilogue. I want to see StingXClarion kids.

Heyaaa! I'm still waiting for you to update and finish this strory. i'm really curious how this story will end. I've been reading it over and over again while waiting for the upcoming chapters. I just love this story cause its so amazing and worth reading many times. Its kinda my fav story all the time! I have faith in you and will always wait for you to finish this story. All da best Eckru san!

woow.. i spent the last days ready your ff and its freaking awesome. I really love it and your OC. I really hopr you will continue the story..

Omg i love it so much hope you update very soon

Mammon...Leviathan...Belphegor...KHR(?)

I think you should start shipping ClarionxRahkeid despite incest and i would predict that Sting will save Clarion and defeated Rahkeid, like in the canon manga minus Clarion...Pls make Clarion and Rahkeid get close or more like a love rival for Sting.

I loved the story and will definitely continue to read it! However, there was one thing that bothered me a little bit which was the fact that Clarion seems a bit too OP. Sure she's not always strong but just the fact that she's a Black God Slayer and has an ability to annihilate Zeref, the most powerful wizard of all time, seems to be kind of absurd. I mean, sure it's a fanfiction so literally anything can be written into the plot but I just feel like it's a bit too much.

Maybe tone things down a little and try to show more of Clarion's weaker side, maybe let her be defeated drastically a couple times, even set her up for near death?

This is hilarious! I LOVE this so much!

Lucifer and Leviathan remind me of Supernatural. :)

Great job on this chapter and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter that you came up with. I think that it's like Mavis got a twin sister without magic, which would be that Clarion would be her niece.

This story is really interesting! I hope you'll finish it, unlike most others.

Its always worth the wait. I really enjoy it! Its as GREAT as always. xD You did a great job!

Great job on this chapter and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter that you came up with. I think that it would have been cool if Clarion could share powers with a devil whole new power, I request that should learn that ability next pretty please. Sorry that I don't post a review for this chapter.

Great job on this chapter and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter that you came up with. I'm glad that you finally put up this chapter and pretty please put up the next chapter.