Reviews for The Consequence of Heat |
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RunsWithWolves77 chapter 15 . 8/26/2018 If this story is supposed to be dramatic, those last few lines are hilarious |
ZianaSue chapter 4 . 7/31/2018 just to clarify: female wolves go into heat. male wolves have a rutting phase. both last about the same amount of time. |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/27/2017 yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss! XD so hot and cute :D |
Matharose111612 chapter 18 . 7/3/2017 it's a lose-lose situation. if you let him go then Aro would go back and get the rest of the Volturi. If he dies (which he did) Marcus and Caius will grow suspicious and assume that something went wrong and then they will send the entire Volturi as well. Like I said lose-lose situation. |
Matharose111612 chapter 14 . 7/2/2017 I thought that Edward has already drank Jacobs blood because in chapter 3 Edward says, "He usually only let me drink from him when he was the submissive one, he said it was sensual, and made his release that much stronger. I loved fucking and feeding at the same time. It had been a while since I got to be on top..." with that I assumed that Edward has already drank Jacob's blood so Jake should of known what it felt like. Love the story! Now is the baby a boy or girl. cause when they we doing the ultrasound it was a "he" now it is a "she" I'm very confused. But I still love the story! |
Matharose111612 chapter 6 . 7/2/2017 please have a litter! or at least twins! |
Tacos chapter 5 . 12/27/2015 No one should be pressuring ed to keep the baby. They might try to show him the pros if keeping it, but they can't make him keep it. It is his body after all. |
aro chapter 20 . 11/24/2015 I was expecting BIRTH, but, oh well |
Guest chapter 24 . 11/14/2015 I'm sorry if I was Edward and I knew she imprinted I would have said "I SHIP ITTT!" send me to a mental hospital. xD |
francis17pr chapter 22 . 11/5/2015 Love it |
lizabeth's luv chapter 10 . 6/21/2015 I get it now kind of like the last twilight |
Guest chapter 21 . 6/4/2015 Ow dare she imprint on my little Anthony!? I'll kill that bitch myself |
Jakewardissexy chapter 23 . 11/27/2014 Oooh!i love this ! |
damnit chapter 21 . 11/27/2014 I was hoping Seth would imprint on Anthony. |
jakwardissexy chapter 18 . 11/27/2014 Omg! FINALLY! I kept hoping and praying Aro would be killed |