Fairly good despite the OC companion, which can be done well (here for example), but usually isn't. You should probably break up that one large paragraph, though: it was fairly well written but a little too much.

Awwwww! God, your river/eleven stories are perfect!

when will there be more?

Aww, cute! I would definitely read that other story!

Priceless. You nailed River.

Love it, looking forward to seeing what happens :)

So, I really liked your story :) I was really hoping you were going to continue from the end of chapter 1. If you do the companion's backstory, do you think you could work in some continuation of this story? I would love to find out more about the companion meeting and reacting to River :)

I'm interested in River's story. I hope that will continue.

Actually, this is a pretty good eleventh doctor/companion/river thing. And the doctor's pretty well described too. But yeah, you should do Emmaline's back story, she, from the start, sounds really interesting.

Adorable! Very well written. You wrote the Doctor very well

This was funny :)

I think you should give Emmaline's back-story - I really like this character. I think the character has the potential to be a good one in other stories - well-rounded, interesting without being overly promoted, strong enough to do things for herself, not falling all over the Doctor (I'm a devoted 10/Rose shipper myself, but 'just friends' is quite refreshing). I like her :)

I can just see River doing this..."a man about a thing, which I may or may not have shot" (actually, I just noticed that this didn't have the second indefinite article before 'thing' in the story, so I would just put out a general note to comb spelling and punctuation one more time)

Very funny, interesting OC, in-character writing, and a refreshing 'just-friends' mentality. I think you should continue.