Reviews for Ninja Wizard IV: Goblet of Fire
cko2 chapter 13 . 6/18/2019
Nice to the goat sucker get bonked and that he really is a dark asshole.
missgsmith51 chapter 13 . 9/11/2018
I find Dumbledore's behavior terrifying - both evil and insane. It's too dangerous for Harry or anyone close to him to be at Hogwarts.

If I were Harry, I think I'd grab Sirius and Remus, my friends and their families, and anyone else important to me and head for parts unknown. I would leave Fudge, Umbridge, and Skeeter to live in Fudge's make-believe world. But before I left, I'd get him to sign an agreement not to call on me for help when Voldemort finally shows himself and starts killing everyone. That might serve as a wake up call, because anyone with a shred of sense knows the Minister will be on the list to die. Then again, no one ever accused Fudge of having any sense.

If Fudge ignores the wake-up call, then Harry and his friends and family can go into serious training back in Japan - or elsewhere - because even if he leaves, Harry knows there will be a day of reckoning at some point. Meanwhile, a team can work on finding and destroying the Horcruxes, so that they're ready when that day comes.

I suppose Harry could go to the PM and let him know what is happening. The PM and the Queen are definitely aware of the Magical world, having dealt with Grindelwald in WWII and the first Voldemort war. Since we can be sure that Fudge has not been keeping up his responsibilities and reporting problems, the nonmagicals will be ready to lower the boom on him. The Queen won't put up with her subjects being victimized again, and the military will probably be called in. Harry and Co. might be safely housed and trained at a military base, where everyone can also be protected. The military also won't hesitate to bomb Malfoy Manor, Riddle Manor, and those big DE estates out of existence.

I'm interested to see where you take things.
missgsmith51 chapter 12 . 9/11/2018
I'll bet Cedric will start carrying a second wand after that experience. If he'd had his wand, things would no doubt have gone very differently. I actually thought that with Cedric alive and witnessing everything, Fudge would have no choice to believe what happened. After all, Cedric is well-respected and the child of a Ministry employee. I'm just curious why no one has suggested watching their memories in a Pensieve.
missgsmith51 chapter 6 . 8/30/2018
"Recant your testimony against me and I will not send Sirius back to Azkaban," Dumbledore said.

Sirius was cleared. How can he be sent back to Azkaban? I can't believe Dumbledore trying to get Harry to lie. He will be mighty PO'd when he learns who Fawkes's new Bonded is. I can't wait to hear those screams.

I think McGonagall is being foolish in sending Harry to Snape without a chaperone. Dumbledore also should not even be in the school with Harry. I think there is injury and kidnapping potential from these two.
missgsmith51 chapter 5 . 8/30/2018
Lucius acknowledged a life debt back in book 2. I wonder if that is why he's coming to Harry's aid. Although I don't like or trust Lucius (despite finding Jason Isaacs quite dishy), he certainly understands the intricacies of life debts and may feel this is a way to satisfy the Malfoy-Potter debt without entangling himself unduly. Draco obviously has no concept of what they entail and what he owes Harry, based on his behavior. Of course, Lucius hates Dumbledore, too, so it could be that he simply views this as a way to get his hated nemesis out of Hogwarts and out of the Wizengamot. We shall see.

I loved the Wizengamot session, but since this is only chapter five, is sure there is a lot of time yet for Dumbledore to cause havoc. I'm glad Sirius is finally cleared. I just hope he has fixed things so Malfoy can't knock him off and claim the Black Lordship for Draco. That would be sad.
Mazzax Manacry chapter 3 . 3/14/2018
Evan being 6 when his parents were murdered by Death Eaters means they didn't actually stop when Voldemort fell. Maybe they were less active than before, but this debunks the narrative that the civil war ended when Voldy was defeated by Harry. I'm not sure why the band would be concerned about the castle as a whole learning about the RoR, because it became common knowledge in Harry's first year in this story.
Also, nobody questioned Moody using the Imperius on the students, and he never told them he'd received permission to do so for educational purposes. 14-year-olds aren't too stupid to remember that the Unforgivables are highly illegal that quickly in that situation. Also, you mention Luna being in that class, but she's in the year below, so wouldn't be there.
Mazzax Manacry chapter 2 . 3/14/2018
How could Harry have been wondering who the year's DADA Professor would be? He was already told about him TWICE. He was also told about the TWT, so I'm not sure why he thought he needed to look it up all of a sudden. Harry seems suspiciously forgetful for someone who maintains a map of everything he's learned on a wall.
ROBERT19588 chapter 8 . 2/2/2018
Why did Harry not get Headwig?

Why are Dobby and Wonky not helping Harry?

Harry was given control of The Chamber of Secrets, why is Harry not using it?

Harry got Grodric's Sward, why it not being used?
Damion Black Blaze chapter 13 . 12/7/2017
Ok , sorry to hear about anyone having legal troubles.
In the first paragraph you have him going all emo again giving the sheople what they want and talking about learning to apparate which he has been doing since book two. I'm lost. You also have him questioning about moody when he already spoke to serious after saying he and James plowed through the trainers even moody.
I can understand not wanting harry to show off all of his skills to or infront of worm tail , but losing situational awareness in the middle of the fight so you have him take Harry's blood the same way as in the books/movies?
Guest chapter 13 . 11/14/2017
What is the point of all this bad ass ninja training if he never uses it and still does stupid shit so the story is following canon almost exactly. I'm done. Leaving dangerous enemies around because they might have info is stupid. All problems at this point are self inflicted. Harry could stop it all already and is choosing not to. This story just makes everyone out to be idiots since they have all this training and knowledge and just let canon mistakes happen anyway. No point in reading more since I know exactly what will happen but with a few ninja skills thrown in that don't make any difference.
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 13 . 10/29/2017
A great story here!
Guest chapter 7 . 7/29/2017
um didn't harry say his adopted mom teach him to dance? in a earlier story of harry ninja
Princesakarlita411 chapter 13 . 3/2/2017
Will there be a fifth ninja wizard? If I were harry I tell the English wizard to go f themselves
WhiteElfElder chapter 13 . 2/14/2017
Didn't Fawkes bond with Harry? If so, why does he never show and Harry forgets to call on him for a quick getaway? Sorry to hear you are going away for a bit; hopefully you come back and have not lost your motivation to write.
WhiteElfElder chapter 9 . 2/14/2017
I thought Harry had a Seal Watch on as it is mentioned numerous times in past chapters?

When did Hermione tell Albus anything about Harry, you said he stunned her, messed with her mind, and then took to her to where the other "hostages" were at?
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