Maybe Tom watches Harry closely. He finds out from Harry having a nightmare or night terror that he was raped and goes kills Veron. When he returns, Harry has cut his arm in an attempt to end it and Tom saves him. Tom tells him that he loves him and reveals some horrible news about dumblbee and the chickens and it comes to light that Harry has two mates, Draco and Tom.

You story has real potential, but you should work on and your syntax... And probably consolidate your plot.

I'm pretty sure someone would want to help you. I was really liking how the story was coming along and I hope you can think of how to make the next chapter(s). Don't worry about it and take a break while still thinking about how to write the next chapter, ok?

This isn't a chapter, it's just a paragraph. Also, use a disclaimer.

It's "eh", but you will need to see about getting a beta.

hope you do continue...

let us know if someone else adopts it

Mhmmm...In the next chapter voldemort discovers that harry is soul mate... Sev and draco save Harry, and...Tom kills vernon. Harry discovers that Petunia is a witch...So...Sorry for mistakes, i'm from Romania so...

UPDATE SOON!and can youswitch pov? or can you captcher harry's abursers.

nice!

Loved this fanfic and can't wait til you get the next chapter up so that I can read and find out what's going to happen next.

cool story! Look forward to the next update!

aww...2nd chapter is so short! Update soon!

This is a very sad chapter. I thought that you should know that!

FAN!

Ahh...get to harry! Next chapter please