nice Shirinui is one of my favorite characters in okami I'm actually thinking of doing a fanfic about him from the celestial plain to his fight against orochi after i finish the fan fix I'm working on now that is

Aww... I cried at this part in the game. Great one-shot, by the way.

Lol, not only is this funny but is nicely detailed and I like the description! Nice job!

B'awww. I wish this was longer. :c

But anyway, this is great! One of the saddest moments in Okamiden. -sniffsniff- Great work though! I'll be looking forward to seeing more from you.

~ With love always, Haachi ~

Oh, Shiruni just yelled at me. *sigh* that's to bad that this is a one-shot. I really liked it.

Awwww, that sad. BUT I DOES WANT MORE! Please continue!

pretty cool keep it up