Ohh... I'm kinda crying.. this is beautiful...
Nicely done...
I'm a bit happy though.. because he was forgiven...

so sad yet so pretty, you did amazing... this story even made me cry

Great job very good story and very sad which fits perfectly. well done!

I was crying! Really that was beautiful! You are really talented!

Choking sobs are all you get from me.

That was absolutely beautiful. I will cry myself to sleep, now.

Brava to you!

*crying* Oh gods...Wheatley, why do you break my heart everytime I read about you or play the game? I'm...I'm going to go curl up in my emo corner...

It's very well written, by the way. *crawls off, clutching heart*

*sniff* beautiful... It's sad, but it's a comforting thought to think he was finally forgiven. Now I want to go outside with my telescope and find a bright star, then name it Chell, even if it already had a name... Where's my telescope?