Great story! I like the twist on Jane’s angst - how they are together but not. Thanks so much!

Excellent writing. I already completely despise Bob

A very moving tale! Thank you for writing and sharing.

Sjoe! This is good. So good. Just as good as all your other work I have read up to now. I started at the bottom, your first published work. I am slowly moving towards your latest stuff. I love your writing! It is all spelled correctly and the grammar is perfect. But even better than that, is the story itself. Please keep on writing, and I will keep on reading.
I would love to purchase your book. Please pm me with where I can find it.

Excellent! ! ! Great job. From beginning to end.

oh sooooo wonerfully and beautifully and ooooooh so good! grazi mille...

So perfect ! Both stories and all chapters . Perfect

Oh, how I always wish for just one more chapter. This fic is always beautiful and sensual and romantic and so full of feels... it gets better every time I read it.

Thank you!

Wow! Just wow... This is amazing writing by any standards. The structure of the story, the telling of the story, the plot, the dialogue, the humour, the scene setting descriptions; everything about it is absolutely superb. I was addicted to this piece of work and now that I've discovered it I know I will re-read it again and again. I cannot fault it in any way despite the few minute errors already pointed out by other reviewers. It seems petty to even mention them as they did not detract from the brilliance of the writing. You are truly talented and I just wish you would continue to write more Rizzles as they are my favourite pairing. One refreshing aspect of this story is that it's Maura lusting after Jane. So many describe the beauty of Maura and Jane's gorgeousness is overlooked. Jane is one stunning woman and I know if I had the choice she'd be the one for me! Often I laughed out loud at your fantastic choice of words, especially coming out of Jane's mouth and her banter with Frost - so entertaining and so in character. Incredible stuff - more please...

Maura's biological father is called Paddy NOT Patty!

Wow! After reading 100's of stories I'm posting my first review... They way you ratchet up the tension is gut wrenching! Great to read something not relying on hard-core sex to make a story... Not that I don't mind that also. My new fav author! Keep up the good work!

I'm actually disappointed that Bob wasn't caught by Jane. When I first started reading this, I wanted Jane to see him for he was and the way that you started to portray him made us think that he was planning was something; he obviously was. He had so much hatred for Maura that I actually was waiting for him to kidnap her or do something more than assault and I was disappointed that he was caught by patty and didn't manage to do it. I was hoping for some kind of confrontation between Jane and Bob if something were happen to Maura. With the way that you were writing it, he was planning something against Maura. It was a twist that I did not see coming and I did wish that Jane confronted Bob; but nevertheless a very good story.

Loved the story, glad bob got what he deserved and that the lovely ladies were able to have a happy ending.

That man is a unbelieveble a...

Excellent! Thank you.