It's so neat how the Phoenix used it's magic to help Terra! I wonder what happened to the Starlet magicite...anyhoo, onwards to the next chapter!

I absolutely love seeing Jidoor transform into Zozo. I wonder how Zozo will be...
It's so satisfying seeing Locke's old tricks coming back to him in little waves.

GAH THIS CHAPTER MAKES ME CRY EVERY SINGLE FREAKING TIME I READ IT! SABIN HAVING TO RECOVER EDGAR KILLS ME HOLY BEANS I STARTED CHOKING JEKBFERJKGBKJERGBJKEBRGJBKREWG

(beautifully distressing heartbreaking chapter!)

I love love loveeee the way you introduce Daryl and make her personality shine through!
Also, gotta love Shadow's attitude.

I've been craving reading this story again for weeks now and just now got around to it and URGHHHH MY HEART MY HEART

I love your writing so much Vraz, and I've missed reading your stuff :) Wonderful chapter! On to the next one~

I love the ending! I wish the original story was more detailed and prolonged, like this one. I felt my face warm because of the fluff hehe. You're an awesome author, the best so far!

Such a well written love scene. Nothing graphic but poetic. Love it!

This chapter is great. It stays true to the game but added your own twist!

Oh noooo Edgar T_T

With FF6 being a 16 bit game, I never really thought that the scenes would be like in this chapter.

And that's why it's sometimes better to read FFs, especially if the author is as good as Vrazdova! Each chapter is so well written, you're one of the best authors here!

Poor Locke, his "what ifs" is really heartbreaking.

Although, you'll likely never read this, as you haven't updated a story in a few years...

Your writing style is simply superb, and I do hope you continued to use your talents. Even though one of my favorite characters died (Edgar), and the other deaths were very tragic (but fitting as per their characterization), I thoroughly enjoyed your story.

I was somewhat disappointed with the ending, but I think that's more so because it's now over. Continue to use your brilliant mind!

I was shocked when I read about Gau's untimely death after fighting with Death Gaze. It almost made me cry. But I must say you've written a very unique version of this that's not like anything else I've read before. It's not a simple rewrite with a few minor details that have been changed, it's a whole new version of it. Which makes me curious to see what'll happen next because I have no clue where you're taking this.

I'd also like to add that your writing is superb. There's a lot of detail, description and emotion in this. You clearly put a lot of time and effort into making this, and it shows because this is a good quality story, and I'm glad I found it.

I have to say, this is a simply spectacular story. Celes and Locke are my favorite couple in all of FF, and what you've done with this story is simply astounding. I'm sure I'll be reading it over and over again. Thank you so much for such a wonderful take on my favorite Final Fantasy!

This is such an amazing story! It was so creative and well-written like all your other stories. Unbalanced has an interesting approach to the World of Ruin. It seems more realistic because Edgar, Gao, and Cyan died. I like how you emphasize themes of hope, motivation, and strength throughout your story. There's well-developed characterization in your story as well. Keep writing! I really like your stories!

You finished it! Really loved all the twists and turns of this story. Thank you for providing hours of reading pleasure. :D