Reviews for Second World
L30 tH3 L1on chapter 53 . 6/26
Please say sirius survives.
L30 tH3 L1on chapter 41 . 6/24
Love the story.
It's good how you intergrated the goblins in!
Hank1967 chapter 99 . 6/14
This is a most excellent piece of work! I love how you respected the canon of both stories when mixing them. I really like how you brought James Bond and Solitaire back together and had them find Harry and save him from Durzkaban and its human dementors. Also really enjoying the twist on Dumbledore. That is very well imagined. The way you've brought Bond canon into the story seamlessly has been fantastic. Love seeing Harry as Bond's son and cohort (after all, who would expect a cute little kid of anything?). The irony of all of this is delicious. Enjoy seeing Tonks and Hermione's dad being brought into the fray. Glad to see Anya back as well. She's a very enjoyable character. Love all of the attention to detail and how you've brought all of the marginal characters (Hermione's dad, Daphne, Tracy, etc.) to life. Great job!
Osmodious chapter 100 . 4/20
Oh, one more point...where is Felix’s hook? You seem to have ignored Live and Let Die here, but it was an important part of the Felix Leiter character in the Fleming Bond books, as well as how it shaped Bond’s later dealings with him. No biggie, just pointing it out...
Osmodious chapter 99 . 4/20
Wow...this is a great story! It’s just well written, but also has good character development, a good balance of dialogue and exposition, good action, interesting ideas (the main plot is very original), and is just a fun read. I’ve only dabbled in crossovers, as most are pretty terrible, but this one is fairly seamless, and is actually kind of necessary for the main plot point...the only part that felt a little forced was the Goldeneye stuff, but I can see how you felt it necessary (though I disagree, eliminating those satellites wasn’t as critical as I think you felt it was). Anyway, that was barely a blip...this is just a good story. Thanks for posting!
gginsc chapter 40 . 3/8
I just found out this is the first part of an unfinished story. Very disappointing. I will stop reading it now and follow the sequel to see if you finish it.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 66 . 3/3
I don't know where you dreamed this up, but I have really enjoyed it so far
aroshan890 chapter 3 . 3/3
Bad grammar, bad punctuation, bad spelling.
Love2read23 chapter 88 . 1/21
I don't known what just made me remember a scene back in chapter 68. In the hospital, Sirius sees Hermione and asks if she knows Harry and tells her Harry's mom was Lils and Hermione replies that Harry's mom name is Tracey not Lily. Then Hermione was upset that Luna spent all summer with Harry's mom but when did Tracey change from Terry in the first chapters and when did she become Harry's mom. Because I thought it was just Harry and James for most of the time and that he didn't really know Jane and her family. Plus Jane changed from Janet. I went back to read the first few chapters and now I'm confused about those opening scenes with Janet coming home from college to do a reading for her mom to tell to James to give to Harry. Then she's flying to an island and named Solitaire then in Gringotts they call her Oracle of Questions. And I thought Harry didn't know Terry/Tracy have a daughter but now they're siblings. Did I miss James and Tracy like committing to each other. I don't think think they're married but maybe and I missed it. But I'm so confused. Help?
Love2read23 chapter 73 . 1/20
I love this story. So much mystery and intrigue. I love how James and MI6 are helping Amelia and Al to clean up the wizarding world.
I'm confused by Sirius' last statement. I thought Charlus Potter died at the castle in the mountains in 1945. I had assumed he'd have to leave a young son alive for him to be Harry's ancestor but Sirius just said Charles was the one to teach him how to be a good father in the 1970's. Was James Potter's dad Charles and his grandfather also Charles Potter? Although, revealed by J.K. James' father was actually Fleamont.
Love2read23 chapter 54 . 1/3
Noooo, how is Sirius?!
Love2read23 chapter 26 . 1/3
Thank you! When they were summoned I'd hoped that the goblins could find something to arrest Lucius on and maybe keep him working in a goblin mine or something. I am glad both Narcissa and Draco are free from his abuse.
Love2read23 chapter 25 . 1/3
I love the court trial and results so much! Yes yes yes! I am bubbling with glee at the punishment and basically political castration that the Malfoys have received. It's a bit worrisome how they will retaliate because I can't believe they won't. I hope that Sirius can as Lord Black make at least Naricssa and Draco vow to not harm the Heir of their blood house. I'm so happy you got Umbridge tied away with this as well.
Saissa chapter 9 . 9/27/2019
I know this is an old story but so far it is a good one. I would like to point out some "continuity" errors in this chapter.

At the sorting Padma went to ravenclaw and Parvarti to gryffindor - which is of course canon.

A few sentences later when Harry go to the gryffindor table, you said Padma was at gryffindor which implies that Parvarti was in ravenclaw. And when the girls became ill through eating beef, again Padma was in gryffindor and Parvati in Ravenclaw which does not match the sorting.

Otherwise this appears to be a great story so far.
CMVreud chapter 50 . 8/25/2019
I can't wait to see the casts faces when they dicover that this is a centuries spanning plan of revenge of the squibs.
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"Revenge of the Squibs"
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