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then the Kids leaped highr than norma Maria ran growling with he then Ran yiu broke rule of immolrtal take care of her my highest screams good the Head ripped loose with the kifsd yiu Lycan die with them the he screamed the the Cullens wre next then then with bitten best friends with them gthen each both then killed brought there we report Immortal Children the Blacks are put to death of immortal children good then myself had three to fiver last ones bitten soi they good dier freaks then too late needle good die there inoldest age with the kids Husk of the shell aged into oldest age died there bring them with they then then With them then brought there we find them Sentenced to death they been With witnesses were Put to death with blod the kids bitten them she's dead Tore from here with immortal children the ser found me paler CARLISLE! Then myself was with sixteen kids was frail then the then the lematya p;oison Alice she's turning then too late was too late Nothingnesse with them hen with te kids's husks then Unable to produce then blew apart brought therte We bring the criminals you Maria five are guilty of they are Put to death we They grow powerful far too strongest then Found then Purplish ashes flames tore Lifeless then then bring the corpses brought them ten With four's Corpses we sentenced the Blacks/Cullens/Witntess/The Phoenix coven the four pack to be executed on April 5th 2063 of freaks are Half-breeds are next then Ashes screams silenced heads lifeless bodies then took from us were as all good more than as all of them Bitten freely stolen loses good train them bury them here then suddenly Alice had a vision was solar powerrful Alice what is it they know you cannot have kids they grew up had kids had kifds but they are angry of us/they Blew freely smashed with them Severed then then brought the corpses then Executed then now us/they never had more kids Alice who done to us/they Volturi oh my god they done terrible things now too late unable to age at all now sterilized were too late Asleep blw apart smashed from husks/shells but delivered them in old age good guard we Sentence you to die you broke rule *Snap* screams then Tore heads true lifeless bodies then were ripped apart then myself was Immortal so they then too late cruelliest executed good they will never be living there then too late from NASA's bodysuits us/they began glowing then Yelling planetary names of planets suddenly from as all of the homes as all of both :BAJOR CRYSTAL POWER! MAKE-UP! SCOUT/KNIGHT POWER! ACTIVATION! Then glowing more alien then transformed us/they were young again dressed from the bodysuits Alice ran tests they cannot die oh my god they are immortal proclaiming from Bajor the planet of the orbs the soldier of the wormhole guardian of the Celestial Gateway Sailor Bajor! mistress of the Doorway will Heat you! gasp they transformed now too late us/they never were humans at all the damages done to us/they no longer alive then it was over time changed were not living anymore the fused five nuked freely then were with last kids aged to be kids nuked unable to have kids wre still frozen solid from here but nulled freely smashed freely then brought there good they never returned to Earth stranded onto Vulcan.

Hoping you may read reviews even though this story is complete. Your writing is excellent and the story was very enjoyable.

Wow this is an amazing story! Thank you for writing it! I’m finding it impossible to stop myself from reading it! Pretty sure I’ll be done reading it by the end of the day, if not sooner!

Is the imprint for Jacob much stronger than it is for Renesmee? There hasn't been a single point in this story that shows Jacob checking out another girl but there have been several mentions of Renesmee checking out other guys. First there was David, then the bell hop, and now Colt. I know she doesn't want another man but she seems to be unintentionally flirting with other guys which just causes issues.

Bella's reaction in this chapter are very AU. I can see her being upset with Renesmee and Jacob for being pregnant but her constant interjection that they aren't even married is actually very against her character. In canon she didn't even want to get married to Edward. She saw no point in it. The only reason she got married was because Edward and her made a deal...she would agree to marry him if they had sex while she was still human.

Wow...I know I shouldn't feel this way but Renesmee is really irritating in this chapter.

I had a feeling that Chuck died. I'm beating that she won't tell anyone about Gloria and that its going to cause major problems.

I knew it was the female vampire from the red eyed coven. They also had sex without protection...not good.

Lol (He drove so quickly, it sort of reminded me of my father. But, honestly, that was the last person I wanted to think about at this moment), loved this chapter.

Oh, man...Jacob is not going to be pleased when he finds out about David. David wants more then to just be Nessie's friend. Jake's date plan is awesome! I'm enjoying Jake's and Renesmee's interactions on their date night.

I recall in the books that the wolf pack has dozens of wolves (~20). Are they all going to be in this story?

I wish it wasn't over allready but it was awesome.I hope you write another book.

GREAT job!

Only one more

I'm proud of nessie