| Reviews for Third Time's the Charm |
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   isis424 chapter 5 . 10/30/2019 LOVE! MOVE! |
| Loki's Tongue chapter 5 . 10/23/2019 Can I make two suggestions? If Botan is a licensed trainer maybe she can whip Harry into shape to keep up with Yusuke Urameshi and the Renkai Tentei in hand to hand combat and work with Genkai whenever the gang is not in tournament fights during the Dark Tournament he should train. Also maybe Harry can find away to merge his magic and spirit energy |
| Kaiser Dragon chapter 3 . 9/16/2019 Can I make a suggestion for Harry's growth? You should make sure Harry Potter shows the versatility of his spells and magic but after his time with Team Urameshi Harry Potter should be equal to Kazuma Kuwabara in terms of his spiritual awareness and use of Spirit Energy but when he uses the Deathly Hallows with his new abilities he is equal to an S Class apparition. |
| Thunder Dragon chapter 5 . 9/10/2019 Oh Roto is so screwed now! I hope to see more. Now can I make a suggestion? Make sure that Harry fully shows the potential of his magic and when using Spirit Energy he is equal to Kuwbara at his base and is equal to an S Class Apparition. But this happens only when Harry Potter is the first wizard who not only masters using magic and Spirit Energy in harmony with one another but truly masters them both. And here is a brilliant idea. Maybe after the Dark Tournament the Deathly Hallows become a part of him and his spirit energy and is able to be passed on to an heir like with Genkai's Spirit Wave. Also Harry then tries to expand on the abilities of the Deathly Hallows. You can do what you want so long as it makes sense. Now for Harry's growth, give him the Spirit Cuffs from Genkai after the fight with Ichigaki's cronies but before then Harry trains with Botan on some ideas on how to use Spirit Energy and ideas on how to build up his reserves. |
| malita23 chapter 5 . 5/14/2019 can you please update when you can |
| DGtnsl chapter 4 . 3/16/2017 It's fun seeing the YYH world from Harry's perspective. Mostly I see the reverse in this crossover fandom, so this is pretty fun to read! |
| hitchigo1 chapter 4 . 10/28/2015 buoy ssse |
| Yusuke Urameshi - Mazoku chapter 5 . 6/3/2015 so it's been over 2 years... |
| Reviewer chapter 5 . 5/23/2015 Please update... Your beloved followers are WAITING... |
| Asherit chapter 5 . 3/17/2015 Oh ! So Harry will cheat ? I like him |
| Yumi Edogawa chapter 5 . 12/5/2014 Darn it! Don't leave me in suspense! What happens next! (Yes I've seen the show, but Harry's viewpoint is very interesting.) |
| Mukuro234 chapter 5 . 11/1/2014 This is pre interesting :) |
| Kittens Kat chapter 5 . 8/1/2014 I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE! THANK YOU! |
| Shadow Wolf 15846 chapter 5 . 5/26/2014 Nice really nice! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| OSR fanatic chapter 5 . 4/22/2014 Great Story! :) Update Soon! :) |
