""I think I found the lake," he says.

Thor's happy smile vanishes, and he takes a step towards Loki. There is the sound of a crack, and Loki rolls his eyes. Damn.""

These lines are my favourite so far, I can just SEE i. It's like a film in my head! Amazing!
I also love your characterisations.

Wow,found this story late and am I ever glad I found it. Well written and compelling, all the good stuff

This story was heart wrenchingly beautiful, start to finish. Thank you for bringing such delightful beauty into the world.

That was really wonderful!

This was so wonderful! I’m in happy tears at the end of it. So many awesome feels. Thank you so much!

Love this! Loki is my favorite Marvel character, and your “Blue” Loki is as multifaceted and compelling as I could hope for. I’m grateful for you- thank you for sharing your gift and time so selflessly to create these awesome stories!

I'm unashamed to say I cried like. a. bitch. Loved the story. Can I request the HEA update?

This is such a wonderful tale. I love the way you portray loki and Darcy. It should come with a tear warning: tissues required. But definitely worth the tears and stuffy nose. thank you for writing this.

Aww that was so sweet! I loved it, thank you.

Omg I’m only on chapter 8 and it’s killing me. Their relationship is heartbreaking!

Loving your story so far. I like the interpretation as Darcy as an artist - I haven’t seen that before. You handle loss, aging/impending death, and love beautifully yet realistically. Looking forward to Loki’s schemes to overthrow Odin’s rule and steal the apples.
But can you please reconsider the wording of this line:
“She is Fandral's lover Doug's daughter. She is six years old” I misread it, and it gave me a mini heartattack. My eyes skipped over “Doug’s daughter”, so I read “She is Fandral’s lover...She is six years old.” A better wording would be “the daughter of Fandral’s lover, Doug” so that there is no confusion. Less awkward/cumbersome wording as well.

It felt so real! I loved it so muchhh!
This story is incredible. I love how you treat the characters in a realistic way and brings up problems of reality. I have no words to describe how I loved it.
Thank you for the wonderful job.

I hope you are still active on fanfic and read this, but I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy this fic. It's the 3rd time I've read it now, since the first time around 2015. I've been sick the last few days and (with the new movie out) thought of this story. It's one of my favourites and has made the time fly. Thanks again

So relieved... this was wonderfully written

OMG! they kissed! UHUL