i was concerned at first when you were showing Reno to be a sympathetic character but then it dissolved into being a creep and i'm okay with it. (rooting for the Yuffentine of course~)

I'm sorry, but i just can't finish this story. The plot sounded cute and it is, but the characters are just too ooc. I also can't get past all the unnecessary adjectives and adverbs. You use way too many words to get even the simplest of ideas through to the reader. There are also entire words missing from sentences so i would get confused a lot. I also got confused when you would change character point of views, maybe having a larger break between them or typing symbols in between the shifts would help. I really wanted to like this story, and I'm sorry that i don't. I am only writing this review because i appreciate constructive criticism and as a writer it is something that we all need. It helps us to write better. Please don't stop writing, you do have a gift with words, it just needs editing.

Love this story.I think this idea is unique for how they get together and Vincent's past especially.

I have one suggestion for you, use less flowery language, I lost what was going on in a few places because of it. take care

You know, when I first read this I thought 'Cool this is different'. You are a fantastic writer, but I won't lie. You pretty much ruined FFVII for me. Vincent's OOC stuff was unbearable. I understand that he was coming out of his shell, but jesus! 'Dearest'? 'Love'? Everybody was so melodramatic. This felt like I was reading a required Shakesphere novel. Reno was the most 'eleoquent' I've ever seen. I just didnt like this. The issue isn't your writing, because you obviously can. It's just..unrealistic

I just finished reading this and this is also the first fic that I'll be writing a review for. I read this whole fic in just one day, and it's pretty good.

There were a few spelling errors and missing words, and I think Vincent is a little bit out of character. I don't really picture him calling Yuffie "angel", "dearest" etc. But well, that's just me. But overall, I liked this fic! Good job. :D

*Sob* that was beautiful. I started tearing up around chapter 14...and then when 18 rolled around I believe my exact thoughts were "ABOUT FREAKING TIME!"

Fantastic. I canNOT believe I haven't read this before. Shame on me.

Among the finest Yuffentines I've ever read, and one of my favorites...it is stories of this caliber that makes me a loyal Yuffentine believer.

An interesting start...

Oh my gosh.. I LOVED it. Sorry I didnt review any other chapters.. I just read the whole thing through without stopping XD I think its one of the best stories I've read so far.. I've read it three times now.. awesome job!

~Roonie

Dear Gods you are a genious! I loved it, I adored it. You captured all the characters so well! It's 2 AM and I just finished reading this, took me two days but what the hell; it was very much worth it! Keep writing or I will send my army of evil chibi Galian Beasts at you!

simply beautfiul

Just wanted to say that this is probably one of the best yuffentines out there. Your story is brilliant, and I love your writing style. You rock! )

Great Story i love it! thank you for writing this story its wonderful:) Yuffietine forever!

I think you should make another story for yuffie and vincent-

Excellent story!

Ah, the wonderful tale of Beauty and the Beast! xD

This fic's AWESOME! w I love your writing style! I wanna put more praise for your writing here but I think would kill me for writing so much. ...

Anyway, killer job!