Reviews for I Want You
emi chapter 1 . 3/6/2015
This Is too cute. Great job
DemeRain chapter 1 . 7/4/2014
Thanks for sharing.
Becca chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
omg my mom thinks I'm a nut I just giggled uncontrollably for a long time omg that was so good
VanillaSwimmer chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
THAT ENDING *drowning in feels*
readingxforever chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
That's story perfectly cheesey... its really brilliant.
Telula13 chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Beautiful!
wolfandanimefangirl208 chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
3 LOVE! great job :D
mormoriarty chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
This is very cute, and I love how the characters seem so realistic! :)
PotterWhoLock chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
That was truly amazing! You write beautifully and you just described there relationship with each other so well and the feelings with John and when Sherlock kissed him! Perfection! I love the story and it was so cute! It was like watching the show. Perfection I love the story! You are an amazing writer!
LittleMissDreamer7 chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
*giggle* YAY! This couple is do meant to be together that it hurts! But this story made all the pain go away ;) I loved it!
JUNEJULYNOLONGER chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
Very good! Very, very good - Well done! JJ
forgetmenotjimmy chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
Best last line ever! Really nice little fic, loved the unprofessional waitress, nice one!

:D
Princess Peachtree chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
This fic is very well construed and all the grammar and spelling is fabulous (it's a relief to read a fic fully that has no blatant grammatical and/or spelling errors). Also, your characterisation is brilliant.

I do, however, have one small problem with reading this. Description is important but only if it is vital to the plot. Although very good description, it does drag on a bit when you are talking about Sherlock's eyes and gets off-track. As much as I appreciate Benedict's features (especially his eyes), it wasn't necessary.

I hope you take my praises and critisisms into account. Thanks for writing something worth reading!
Princess Peachtree chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
This fic is very well construed and all the grammar and spelling is fabulous (it's a relief to read a fic fully that has no blatant grammatical and/or spelling errors). Also, your characterisation is brilliant.

I do, however, have one small problem with reading this. Description is important but only if it is vital to the plot. Although very good description, it does drag on a bit when you are talking about Sherlock's eyes and gets off-track. As much as I appreciate Benedict's features (especially his eyes), it wasn't necessary.

I hope you take my praises and critisisms into account. Thanks for writing something worth reading!
Goldentea chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
beautifully composed! I loved every moment of it seriously! Cute! I enjoyed it a lot! Keep on writing like this!
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