Reviews for I Want You |
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emi chapter 1 . 3/6/2015 This Is too cute. Great job |
DemeRain chapter 1 . 7/4/2014 Thanks for sharing. |
Becca chapter 1 . 8/21/2013 omg my mom thinks I'm a nut I just giggled uncontrollably for a long time omg that was so good |
VanillaSwimmer chapter 1 . 8/3/2012 THAT ENDING *drowning in feels* |
readingxforever chapter 1 . 7/6/2012 That's story perfectly cheesey... its really brilliant. |
Telula13 chapter 1 . 6/30/2012 Beautiful! |
wolfandanimefangirl208 chapter 1 . 5/18/2012 3 LOVE! great job :D |
mormoriarty chapter 1 . 4/18/2012 This is very cute, and I love how the characters seem so realistic! :) |
PotterWhoLock chapter 1 . 4/17/2012 That was truly amazing! You write beautifully and you just described there relationship with each other so well and the feelings with John and when Sherlock kissed him! Perfection! I love the story and it was so cute! It was like watching the show. Perfection I love the story! You are an amazing writer! |
LittleMissDreamer7 chapter 1 . 4/12/2012 *giggle* YAY! This couple is do meant to be together that it hurts! But this story made all the pain go away ;) I loved it! |
JUNEJULYNOLONGER chapter 1 . 4/12/2012 Very good! Very, very good - Well done! JJ |
forgetmenotjimmy chapter 1 . 4/12/2012 Best last line ever! Really nice little fic, loved the unprofessional waitress, nice one! :D |
Princess Peachtree chapter 1 . 4/11/2012 This fic is very well construed and all the grammar and spelling is fabulous (it's a relief to read a fic fully that has no blatant grammatical and/or spelling errors). Also, your characterisation is brilliant. I do, however, have one small problem with reading this. Description is important but only if it is vital to the plot. Although very good description, it does drag on a bit when you are talking about Sherlock's eyes and gets off-track. As much as I appreciate Benedict's features (especially his eyes), it wasn't necessary. I hope you take my praises and critisisms into account. Thanks for writing something worth reading! |
Princess Peachtree chapter 1 . 4/11/2012 This fic is very well construed and all the grammar and spelling is fabulous (it's a relief to read a fic fully that has no blatant grammatical and/or spelling errors). Also, your characterisation is brilliant. I do, however, have one small problem with reading this. Description is important but only if it is vital to the plot. Although very good description, it does drag on a bit when you are talking about Sherlock's eyes and gets off-track. As much as I appreciate Benedict's features (especially his eyes), it wasn't necessary. I hope you take my praises and critisisms into account. Thanks for writing something worth reading! |
Goldentea chapter 1 . 4/11/2012 beautifully composed! I loved every moment of it seriously! Cute! I enjoyed it a lot! Keep on writing like this! |