Reviews for Naruto: Tobikomu Kitsune |
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jhasd12 chapter 5 . 12/20/2012 so far I've been very entertained. please update |
Hyena-Sennin chapter 5 . 11/17/2012 Not bad, go on! |
Narudevilfan chapter 2 . 8/2/2012 The only complaint I have so far is simply that having such a drastic change to his childhood (such as his mother being alive) should really warrent a couple of chapters of him growing up with her still alive. Everything else is pretty nominal. |
Naru Hina chapter 4 . 7/30/2012 warn us if it's NaruHina... |
demon chapter 5 . 7/29/2012 great history |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/29/2012 Naruto x Kushina pairing ! |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/23/2012 wow what a fail story he gets all the knowledge and power of the kyuubi and is still a complete moron. you really didn't enough thought into this plot |
desertrommel chapter 4 . 5/5/2012 You. Are. Awesome. I really love this chapter and this story. Keep up the good work dude. |
Koroby chapter 3 . 4/28/2012 A little too random for my liking. That and the Over 9000 usage has me disliking this story. I'll give it a few more chapters to see if it keeps up. |
guest chapter 2 . 4/23/2012 good chapter i say put him in team 10 or a fill in for all teams |
SimFlyer chapter 2 . 4/22/2012 Cool stuff so far, I hope you change the teams a bit. Helps mix it up a bit. Cant wait to see how strong Naruto really is. Looking forward to more. |
S-Wanderer999 chapter 2 . 4/22/2012 A nice chapter, and I liked the pact Naruto and Sasuke had made. And speaking of Sasuke, what happened during the Uchiha massacre? Did any other Uchihas survive (especially children), and did Kushina help Sasuke (and any other young Uchihas) after the massacre? Due to Kushina and Mikoto being friends when younger, I can picture Kushina helping out Sasuke (especially if he tries to raise any young Uchihas). As for the teams, since Naruto is dead-last (unless special circumstances are allowed) and Sasuke is most likely top of the class, the only spot open on the team is for the top female ninja. My thought is to keep Team 8 the same, while having Ino go on Team 7 (and thus leave Sakura to Team 10). After all I wonder how Sakura could manage to beat both Ino and Hinata for the final tests. Yes while she may be very book smart, her physical capabilities are pathetically low, while both Hinata and Ino due to coming from shinobi clans would be in better shape since they would do some clan exercises at home (and it's when you combine the written and practical portions that cause me to wonder just why Sakura was first amongst the girls). |
ardad95 chapter 2 . 4/22/2012 I vote putting naruto on team 8 and kiba on team 7 |
Dark Kyuubi chapter 2 . 4/22/2012 Good chapter but please try to make them longer. DON'T pair Naruto with Hinata. Please update soon. |
Dark Kyuubi chapter 2 . 4/22/2012 Good chapter but please try to make them longer. DON'T pair Naruto with Hinata. Please update soon. |