Awesome chapter i loved it and pass on the ice cream xb update soon. :)

don't worry. the plot line is good, and you're bound to find someone who's willing to beta-read this. i would love to, but poor account-less me can't. so yeah. please don't discontinue this, it has so much potential. and yeah they are ooc but i like it.

Noooo whyyyy, another awsome story down the drain *heart breaks*. :'(

Aw but I like the OOCness... :(

Hm... Interesting story so far. Unfortunately, in the first two chapters I counted 73 spelling and grammatical errors, disclosing the past/present tense mix up. I like your description, but Zuko, Katara, and Iroh all seem to be out of character. It seems as though Zuko has lost his fire, Katara, her feistiness, and Iroh... It just isn't him.

Love this so much! Totally worth the wait! Update soon!

Soo good! I really like this story. And I don't really mind the OOC-ness. Update soon!

And happy birthday!

I dont really know wat a ooc or beta is so yeah sorry for being a noob update soon. :)

I love Zuko and Katara and always contemplated the after, especially upon rebuilding the nations. I love that Zuko could never forget Katara and she's always been on his mind, but is worried that its the Avatar, Katara chooses, but what of Mai, isn't she lurking around too. I loved that they both kept contact at long distance. It seems that Zuko is in love with Katara. Can't wait to see what will happen and how their reunion will be like.

I love your story so far so cant wait till the next chapter

Yes ahh man i missed this story awsome chapter update soon. :)

I like this idea but there are some grammatical errors and the characters are a little OOC. sometimes it's easy to include what we say everyday when we write As a suggestion what works for me when i want the characters to act and sound as much as themselves as possible, especially when they are dealing with something they've never dealt with before, i have it playing in the background. but as i said just a suggestion. I wish you luck and I will be returning to read your piece.

Such a great start! :) I am a very patient person so i can wait...

Omg first chapter and i already love it hope you update soon. :)

I love this concept. It is a really good start to the story. I do want to point out one thing, be careful using spell check and watch your grammar etc. You have dint, instead of didn't and you used the wrong threw (it should of been through)for example. But these small errors didn't greatly effect my reading experience. I just want to point it out so you can be aware of it for future chapters.

I am looking forward to seeing how you progress with Zuko and Katara's relationship. It is my favourite relationship in Avatar because it is only in all our imaginations so it can be delveloped and created in so many ways.

Can't wait to review the next chapter

Shel