Sadly I'm on the end of your story, which I really enjoyed. i like your writing style and the characters are good on point. Hope you continue writing, so i can enjoy once more the life of neal caffrey :)

What a fantastic story!

I can't seem to be able to write a review here.
But anyways, hope this one gets there.
I have read this story before, some time ago and now came back, because I remembered how great it was. How emotional, dramatic and entertaining. Thank you

I have read this story a few months ago, came back now. Your writing is exceptional, the characters portrayed in the most compelling way.
I loved the whole story, but it were the last few chapters that engraved in my memory and made me read it again. There is something so terrifying in others making decisions about one's life with a complete authority over it. I was short of breath when Neal was. I felt tension and stress and some sort of numbness I have felt only a few times before in my life.
It's amazing how you brought back those feelings. I don't tend to get emotional while reading stories. But this one just felt real.
Thanks.

I really enjoyed this story,,,one of my favorites now. You write these characters very well. I wish you’d write more!

nice solution :)

When I started reading this story I just couldn't stop indtil I had read the entire story. It is fantastic.

It's rare that I find a piece of fanfiction that tells a better story than the one the show's writers came up with but this is one of those stories. I'm a big an of your work.

I really enjoyed this story, and I think it would have worked perfectly into the canon of the season, as well as sorting out the Kramer business because it was never explained completely. The level of suspense was agonising at times, especially as it made me pause from my fanfic writing, but apart from that I have no other complaints.

great wonderful story!

can definitely understand neal's statement, as sad as it is...

love this chapter!

doesn't look good for neal's future right now...

sounds like a dangerous game neal is playing here...

looks like they've got someone to cross over to their side...