I kind of dislike Lily's characterization in this story. I cant follow what made her fall into James after 6 years of incessant rejections and it seems like she suddenly realized her long hidden feeling. I was hoping something more had happened that made Lily to change her description of James from the beginning of the story and fall for him. Plud her desperation to keep Severus out of the "telling who is involved" thing. I know Lily has had long and deep friendship with him but the time has changed, she is in danger and had been tortured by a serious dark arts, Severus is going to be a Death Eaters like Avery who cursed her and she still wants to protect him? Voldemort and the war is not just limited to Lily, its related to every Muggleborns and the magical world, and she wants to hide what she knows about it despite its danger to the others because of her past friendship. Its not like Lily.

Cool story

this is such a lovely chapter, I love how you showed how Lily and Severus still cared for each other!

Just wanted to say this is a wonderful story. There aren't many fan fics that have real writing skills behind it and yours definitely does. Youve done such a great Job! I hope you continue, I'm so sad I don't have more to read! Keep up the great work.

Aww :3 I've just read the story, and can't wait for the next chapter :)

Ahhhh!

Wow. Just, wow. This story has left me nearly speechless (and believe me, that doesn't happen alot.) I never thought I'd read anything that I loved as much as the Harry Potter series, but I'm not lying when I say that this comes very close. It is incredible, the storyline, the plot, the events, the way you've written this is exquisite. I love James and Lily as a pairing, and you have written in a way that JKRowling would be proud of, and now when I think of James and Lily's seventh year at Hogwarts, this is what I will think of. I wish I'd found it sooner. I honestly love it, and hope very much that it will continue. I can't think of anything else to say except that you are a brilliant writer, and I love this story so so much. Please update it soon, absolutely dying to read more. :) x

It's too bad they never catch the spy, not in time... :( Anyway, I just love this couple!

I love Sirius! Very well written.

I liked the events of this chapter and I want to see what happens with Peter spying on them and how it affects the group.

You've made this while James and Sawyer thing really interesting and I want to see what happens next.

A lot of drama in this chapter! Nice and interesting!

Aaahh, I love this! Was shown it by my friend, and I'm hooked already!

Words cannot describe my love for this story!

I really like this chapter. Some good action and I want to see what Lily will be telling James.