Sanji was so cute. He should always be an uke.

sweet one shot! really hot ;)

loved it!

I would say that there are some things that you should work on, but apparently you got this story line from a doujin.
I'm pretty disappointed about that.

Please write something from your own mind next time.

very nice

Sexy little story. I needed a quick fix and i found it in this story )

Or you can just got to youtube and look up sanji and zoro dark nights. It would be like the second or third one down. I only know this cause I just recently read it XD

watch?vY_ngEWi3O78
thats the link, not the other one.

watch?vY_ngEWi3O78
This is the link for the doujin.

This was done in a doujin already. You probably should mention where you got the idea from. I see you changed some things up, like the ending and all, but some of your lines are almost exactly like that in the doujin. That is considered plagiarism.

Hm o_o...If I haven't gone crazy, I'm pretty sure there's a doujin really close to this. Also, super sexy 3

Okay, this was... Too sexy... Asddafddvs

Zoro, I love you, but, this time you was an asshole! XD Poor cook! He was freezing! And wanted to relax...
Well he relaxed after all, in a good and pleasurable way!
While I was reading your story it seemed to me that it was something like a doujinshi lol I don't know, maybe I've been reading too much doujinshi and now when I read some ZoSan fanfic the images pop up in my mind easily...
Seriously, I loved your description and everything!
And it was a so perfect lemon *-*
Excellent work
My question: May I translate your fanfic to Portuguese? *-* It would be really nice!

I love how you didn't over do it. But just like life writing its self has many imperfections so don't worry about your spelling.

A nice hot steamy piece of bath smut! Just what i needed to make my day! XD Thank you for that! Zoro's too great for words...;p