Well that was a disappointing end

Kill yourself. It makes sense why your mother gets a cum filling with any cock on legs. She's obviously trying to replace you, and she deeply regrets not aborting you. Do her a favor, and go fuck off a roof or bridge.

It's a shame that you neither have the heart, nor the time to continue with this, but at the same time, I'm a little greatful that you decided to end it with this epilogue, so much better than having to leave it to gather dust for several years like most authors do. I admit that the foot worshipping scene at the 9th chapter was hot, I pretty much enjoyed the majority of that scene, since I have a foot fetish. I wish the Harry/Daphne relationship would continue to explore, I admit I was upset that she had to sacrifice herself to kill Voldemort and the Death Eaters at the end, and Harry ended up with Hermione. Not that I mind the Harry/Hermione pairing, but I feel like in this fic, all the buildup and sexual tension he had with Daphne, I think personally, he should've been with her. Oh well, can't have everything, can I?

I'm grateful that you at least gave us the end plot. Kinda wished this would have been continued but...alas... Most go unfinished.

This is ridiculous. If Harry's in 6th year, he's 16. He's an abused child, neglected and, likely, beaten by his family. I, the same age and formerly in the same situation, managed to think of a way to get out instantly.

Cut off his finger with the ring on it. No finger equals no ring. No ring equals no slavery.

Yak...

... what?
It doesn't matter that Daphne's attractive, there's no way Harry would be fine with being enslaved, especially considering that that was pretty much what he lived with under the Dursleys. Even in master/slave BDSM relationships, the most important thing is _consent_-and even though he hasn't found out that she set up the entire scenario, she obviously exploited the hell out of his agreement beyond what he understood the offer to be. Add in that she further claimed ownership of what his parents left to him, and you should have a furious Harry, not one who's so passive or even alright with being a slave.

And sure, he didn't take the half-hour to an hour it would take to properly sift through her words and eventually get an abuse-free statement from her, but from what he knew (and had no way to know he was in a set-up situation), he only had a short time until the Death Eaters returned. Debating would be a sure-fire way to get himself and his friends killed or subject to pains that would make them wish for death. The way people keep blaming _him_ for willingly becoming a slave, in a situation set up to give him no other option is just... incalculably annoying.
And it's unrealistic to expect her not to be required to keep a magical oath just because she owned the subject of it-that's an oath on magic, not on a person.

"She was uncomfortable for lying about that to him. Daphne knew that she would like to know if she were destined to die."
?
She's shown very little sign of caring for how he feels up until this point.

"I mean, it looked quite genuine and she isn't a person who would mock you like this."
Where'd this come from? Even if Harry is starting to crush on Daphne for whatever reason, she's been mocking him almost every conversation they've had (and mocked him a few times when talking to someone else).

"She hated that the dunderhead wasted his time fooling around and playing quidditch."
That would be awful-the final part, at least. Quidditch is what he enjoys most, and now that he genuinely isn't free he'll need the feelings of freedom that it evokes more than ever.

"She had to get the weasel out of the picture and Hermione to agree to be her slave."
Why?

"You shouldn't get used to just doing what she says. Sure it'd be easier, but you should try to do what is right and what you must."
Good thing he found loopholes, then. But that doesn't actually let him disobey her.

"He froze at her words and asked, "She likes me?""
It looked more like she was feeling affection like an owner does it's pet, but how'd she decide to go after Harry in the first place? She never met him, all she and Tracey know about him are the bizarre rumors that've popped up around him, she's never been close to them... when has she had the opportunity to develop so much as a crush beyond the standard "Boy-Who-Lived" crush I suppose every girl her age had for at least a short while?

"Although it's not quite true. Hermione's dating Daphne. Harry's their willing (at that point of time) slave."
Ignoring how twisted it is that Daphne decides not to use the ring on Hermione but not Harry, why does Hermione play the role of slavemaster to Harry too? She's aggressively opposed to the idea of slavery, and you earlier in the explanation chapter stated that Daphne had Hermione playing the sub.
Also, why does he convince Hermione that she's well-meaning behind her selfishness? We know that she is (mostly from Astoria and this not-quite-chapter), but Daphne explained how exonerating Sirius was a huge benefit to her own family.

"It's however easier to let everyone assume that they're weird trio-lovers."
How aren't they? Daphne and Harry lied about dating, so that's off the table, but Daphne and Hermione are dating, and are sharing Harry as a slave between them. That's a three way relationship, unless Hermione is ordering Harry around in a completely nonromantic/nonsexual way.

I thought the story had a lot of potential and I liked the idea. But the way just about everyone's either looking down on, insulting, or devaluing Harry is grating; the closest anyone's come to even being upset with Daphne is Astoria saying she shouldn't have done it (you've got the eventual anger of Hermione's side over it... that promptly turns around into a relationship again, despite Daphne having led her on to enslave her, taking advantage of the Harry/Hermione rift, for an unknown period of time. And you saying her dad would be upset... but that he'd understand.); excusing her behavior through cultural/species subjective morality like the conversation with Hermione over house elves was presumably meant to...

Overall, it feels like an unhealthy representation of a magically-enforced BDSM relationship, where the slave's forced into slavery but enjoys it and the master is largely excused for doing so by the most dubious definition of "consent".

I must say, though, I would have loved to see how this affected the Triwizard Tournament.

Also, Daphne never ordered him not to attack her. Why has he never done so? Could he have cut off the finger the ring's on, then regrown a new finger?

Thanks for finishing that all off. It was an interesting read. I'm not certain how I felt about it overall but you had one hell of a plan!

Love that even though you don't want to continue, you still gave us an ending. That's awesome :) thanks

Good and interesting, thank you.

I am a little bit disappointed that you wrote just about 1-2 weeks of Hogwarts and that all Daphne wanted from Harry are kisses and licks of her feet.

It would have been extremly hot to read a lemon how Daphne orders Harry to lick her pussy or how she would ride him. She was so worked up, she owns him and he, like every male, would have loved it. So I don't see why you wouldn't write such a lemon... :(

On the plus side, you wrote what you planned to write to the end (even if Daphne using an suicid spell is stupid), every author who wants to quit should write an final chapter like you. Thank you for not letting us readers hanging.

Incomplete story, and the ending seems like it isn't for everyone regardless... almost certainly not for the romantics. Just a heads-up.

this is the stupidest shit ever haha harry is a little bitch boy. y0ur mind has some problems to even think of something so fucked up

Damn dramatic ending! That climax was amazing!

So good

Whyyyyyyyyyyy