The way this story goes and is written sure is infuriating in more ways than one. Dropped.

Shirou IS practically a demigod. He killed Gilgamesh as a normal human magus. He created a reality marble, and fought Servants, pseudo divine spirits on equal footing. He was also Gandalfr, a familiar that can fight entire armies alone, and was granted power by the strongest mage of Halkeginia, who was considered a magic Jesus figure. So yes, he is a demigod figure, perhaps a child of Alaya herself. It is weird how he joined her service...

This like hill of swords

I would had read on if not for the "do not kill" order. . ...

Tiffania fits the Too Stupid To Live trope - I hope you off her. Soon ... ASAP ...

NMe gusto la historia, ahora el hijo de shirou seguira su propio camino por el cual su padre camino.

It's too bad that you seem to have disappeared from fanfiction. I think I might have liked to read more for this story. Kiri does seem to go and follow that no killing order a little too easily, but you're the author so I guess what you say goes lol. Meh whatever. Doesn't make this story all that horrible. Good work so far, hope you decide to stop your disappearing act sometime soon.

please dont anandon this amazing story

I always wanted to see the Duchess coming to this world and their reaction to learning that he is Henrietta son.

please back

the aria should have been unique.
one of my dislikes is that the oc is a carbo copy of shirou.
maybe try to diff them a bit. gice oc a unique trait that wasnt shirou.

please back

This is greatness inspired by extraordinary greatness!

Utter trash

And the next chapter never comes. Too bad.