That was a good story, very well written! Lets hope Vince will leave Raf alone...

Just another normal weekend at the Autobot base for Mr. Rickers.

Happy birthday by the way:)

nice character development between the different characters in this chapter.

Michael Rickers; incredibly violent and brutal when faced with his enemies, tender as a mother hen with small children.

Keep up the good work!

Oh snap, that is a tight spot.

This is going to get interesting fast.

It's really great the way you are not afraid to show your character in moments of weakness as well as strength. It gives a real depth to the story and character alike.

It looks like you are getting the hand of third person point of view. :) You work is flowing better with every paragraph.

Grammar and sentence structure are excellent as far as I can tell. In analyzing that I actually keep bumping up against the old Anglo/American decide. Is it improper English or just dialect variance?

Scaring the energon out of the biggest creeper in the show. Nice :D

And finally caught up to your newest story!

Looking like a good start. the first bit is a touch wordy but as you get warmed up and into the story the redundancies seem to fade, interesting.

Ah, poor little Raf. I'm afraid he is doomed to quite a bit of bullying in these fanfictions.

Looking forward to your take on it.

Great chapter as always! :)

I've read the previous two stories and really liked them (took me a while to read them :p), and i'm liking how this one is progressing. I like the relationship you've developed between Micheal and Elita.

Though i'm really starting to feel sorry for Micheal now, seems like he can never get a break.

Ah, yes. The writer's block. That sick little slagger. Let me see...think,think,think...Vince's revenge thingie. Have me come in your story and beat Vince up because he's a jerk!

And, uhhhhhhhh, um...are you going to make Micheal some kind of an A-team guy where he runs from the athourities and helps people with their problems? (insert A-team theme song here) That would be cool. Just suggestions. You may know me as Awwwwwwwww. Ratchet and Sophie on the Learning To Love story. Every other story I'm Awesome, though.

D: That's horrible! I hope they don't Say he's a murderer! ;.;

I didn't know Wales had so much effect on America history. My teachers didn't tell us anything about it! :( thanks for the facts! :D

Oh, and making people happy is what I live for! Your welcome! :)

This is a pretty interesting fic! I like it so far!

Great chapter! Hope everything ends up okay for Michael!

Don't feel sad! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :D

I hope my many smiley faces helped you. Wait, here's one more. .

:D this is a really good story. Everyone needs a British friend, I love them. May you have more brilliant ideas!