I really liked it! It such a shame it's a one-shot I really like it!

There are a few errors here (example: "If he weren't a firebender, to probably would have burned him"). Still, it's a great one-shot, and I wish that the actual series had gone this way.

WHHHAAAAAATTT? You must continue! And you must do it now before I explode! THIS IS AMAZING! XD

Great story!

Very nice, I always like it subtle like that. As much I hated how Zuko chose "wrong" in the series, I did understand that he had to experience having everything he wanted and choosing to abandon it himself. But, ah, there could have been so many better ways to go about it. ;)

Ah, this was lovely. A very nice alternative to the CoD scene. I like that you didn't focus on the romance. :)

Aww! I like this! I got chills. DDD

That was very cute! I like how Zuko remembered who he was, I love pulling from flashbacks from his mom. Great job!

This was great! I really enjoyed reading it and getting the full experience behind Zuko: the confusion, not understanding his decision, and the point of realization in the end after remembering his mother's words.. This was fun to read and it felt real (characters stayed in character). Great job(:

-InconsciousSin.

This is a wonderful piece. You really managed to capture the confusion that Zuko must have felt over his choice.

Sweet, I like it are you going to continue? That would be cool :)

Great work on this.

Good job with this, you did something a lot of people can't, you kept it real - Zuko didn't just think, "Hey, I like this water tribe girl, let's betray my nation." (Like people do, unrealistically, in a lot of fics) You really captured his inner turmoil well. I loved the way you incorporated his memories of his mother here. Great job!

Oh how lovey. If only it had been like that in reality. Sigh. I was most displeased with him in this episode. But he came to his senses eventually, but what a hard road it was for our little prince. Heh. He reminds me of Hiei, no?