Reviews for Fathom the Ocean, Dark and Deep |
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714 chapter 1 . 7/6/2014 *sobs intensely* that was beautiful |
wolfeclipse25 chapter 1 . 4/15/2013 I saw the words 'JFK Library' and though 1) "Wow, they're right nearby!" 2) "The JFK Library caught on today. And Boston exploded during a marathon." ... Yeah, it was a busy day for MA. |
srooone chapter 1 . 3/19/2013 This was damn good. |
Written Fire chapter 1 . 2/7/2013 Oh my...this was amazing..you did a good job with all of it, and just oh, poor Artie... I loved this. |
9foxgrl chapter 1 . 1/22/2013 this was a cute story |
Kiki-Bunny chapter 1 . 8/17/2012 I teared up a bit reading this. Well written and very thoughtful! I'll be sure to follow you on tumblr. :) |
Gabrielle Smith chapter 1 . 7/25/2012 WOOOOOO! o HOT SMEX TIME! Nice |
mar-iguana chapter 1 . 7/17/2012 I am SO in love with you right now. Wow, that was just.. Wow.. So perfect and awkward, yet un-perfect and awesome in all the right ways! sOOOOoO AMAZIIIIING |
InnerShadow chapter 1 . 4/28/2012 Sorry, too lazy to log in. BUT I couldn't leave without telling you how much I enjoyed this ... And I am a hardcore FrUk shipper. The emotion was beautiful, and I love how you included Boston... And all the places I love to go. :) excellent job! |
D-Channerz chapter 1 . 4/23/2012 This was beautiful and wonderfully described. Very sweet and sappy (but I love sap) and just so lovely~ I love awkward!Alfred in this especially, haha. Great job! |
UnluckyWriter chapter 1 . 4/22/2012 This is...beautiful. Gorgeously written. Emotionally precious and real. Fluffy. God...this...is a masterpiece. |
Hellie Ace chapter 1 . 4/21/2012 I've never wanted to go to Boston... until reading this fic that is! xD Somehow, it now sounds like a /very/ appealing place. Awww, the derpy smut is cute and I just love how derpiness became a word. ;) Have I told you your made up words are amusing? Because they are! Artie's guilty heart is ever so sad, but I'm glad Al provides him a little relief (okay, probably a lot of relief with that smoking hott, unadulterated sexiness of his). I really liked all the allusions to the ocean. I think it creates such a neatly constructed piece that isn't just a sad story and some cute smut at the end. I like how the ocean ties everything together in this. Well done! *claps* |
XxCharlottexX1 chapter 1 . 4/21/2012 Aw, this is so cute. :) I think you did a splendid joh balancing the cute, derpy and sexy in the smut part, and this was so sweet i was just smiling the entire time. :) Theres just something about this fic that made it all seem so real; maybe it was the emtions, or the derpyness, I'm not sure. I just know I really liked it. :) |
worldaccordingtofangirls chapter 1 . 4/20/2012 Doing a live review. Okay, I love the way you've set up this first little bit, especially the metaphors and similes that you use. Wonderful. Your explanation of Arthur's feelings regarding the death are fantastic. Now oh my gosh they're so cute oh my gosh I just love them a lot CUTIES ahhh I love Alfred so much I'm gonna die I swear! What is a claddagh FUCKING GODDAMN CUTIES Then the sex - and the end - and the - ! Wow this was perfect a lot |