The premise of this story caught my interest but if you don't mind a bit of constructive criticism, you really ought to look it over and re-edit it (if you are still active on the site, I noted that this was published quite a few years ago). It's got one rather large problem, not with the story telling or the wording but with the story's tense. The text changes from present tense to past tense several times, even in the middle of a sentence!

For example: "I disconnect myself from the tangle that Peeta and I had a routine of becoming." You start by using the present tense - Katniss disconnects herself right there in that moment. Then you switch to past tense - they had a habit of doing it, but not anymore, not right now. It should read: "I disconnect myself from the tangle that Peeta and I have a routine of becoming."

Essentially your characters time travel quite frequently and it's a jarring read. Distracting enough that I had to set the story aside.

I hope you won't take offense at me pointing this out. I did like the premise and the parts I did read were well written. The tense is the only problem, and unfortunately that is a very big problem. You might have become aware of this yourself in the years since writing this but if not, it's something to keep in mind. I think you have talent and grammatical errors can be fixed.

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This is so amzing! Omg. SfsgsggsvafsvabdjFfskagskmd

This is amazing! I love that they aren't perfect, yet still know how to make the most of their time together! So cute, and I love Katniss just resorting to stick figures. :D

Update soon! I can't wait to read what's next! :)

Love love love this! Please update with more everlark goodness!

I just wanted to say that both chapters of this made me smile like a loon. Thank you.

I. AM. IN. LOVE. WITH. THIS. I'm so glad I stumbled to this one. It's so perfect, warm and cuddly without the two of them getting too ooc.. just enough to emphasize the fact that they are both in love. Kudos! Amazing work :)

This is so good! I love Peeta and Katniss :)

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this was so adorable! I was like smiling the whole time because of how sweet it was! EXCELLENT story! :D

Lovely story. I'm glad you guys were able give Peetniss a better ending. Most fics are so much better than the book. Really good job!

that was so beautiful... I love little stories like these and this is so perfect. 3

I love that you wrote another chapter! Please keep writing - do! You have captured them perfectly.

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I. LOVE. THIS.