Reviews for The Provider
Different Child chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
FOOD. XD You're in food for a living. I think that makes sense. But DAWWW MAKO AND BOLIN! it's something that's hard for me, understanding sometimes. I grew up in an affluent household and we're more tight on money now but never that tight. I don't understand it always. After going overseas I get it better, but I always jut was the kid bringing food ot her firends, and stuff, like Korra. Money isn't something Korra's ever been wanting for. As the Avatar she's never really needed it? Until RC. Things were just provided for her. Even living at ATI things are provided. It's a good lesson too with this. :) Great GREAT one Shoe!
scorchedtrees chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
I like how you portrayed Mako and Bolin's financial situation, and how Korra reacted to it—it's true that many people take for granted what they have. The Makorra interaction was cute. Nice job!
Daisy Dollop chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
You know, I really felt like you captured Korra and Mako. The words, reactions, and the atmosphere between them. I like how you explore the difference in lifestyles, and since Korra probably has always been provided for, she would be uncomfortable in this situation. You captured Korra and Mako. Perhaps you write about food because sharing a meal is special in all cultures. When you offer to share a meal, you are accepting the other person, and it opens up the relationship with the chance to grow. It's small things you catch that I really like in this one shot.
JackieStarSister chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
This was short but well-written, and both were in-character. Good job. :)
deadsylifer chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
Youre going very well so far, please continue this. I love it when mako loses his mind. :D
partner555 chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
To Bolin, the world must have been ending during the last bit. HAHAHAHA! I like it.
toffeecakesxox chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
this is so beautiful!

and so simple!

i love this so much (:
Incandescent Adolescent chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
SOB SOB SOB

My poor babies ;_;

/shoves money at Mako and Bolin
RollingStars chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
So adorable, it brought a huge smile to my face. It was simple and sweet, great job 3
TheWonderfulShoe chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
That was adorable...not to mention that I could actually see it happening!
XxNeonShadowsxX chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
I never would've guessed you're new to this. You did a great job with this oneshot; vivid descriptions of everthing and all in-character. And of course, it had Makorra. That just adds to the awesomeness. Sorry, I'm a crazy fangirl with absolutely no life. Anydip, you've got an epic oneshot here. Hope to see more like this soon. Keep up the good work!

-Aiden Rose
Mandarins chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
Aw. I always feel bad about Mako & Bolin's situation. Seeing their apartment - which is an attic above the pro-bending fighting arena D: - was just. wow. You see how they make do with what they have. & you make it better through this fic with Korra giving food & all.

~ Love it. :D
toushiro1310 chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
I love this! I'm looking all over for fics of this type. Good to see Korra observing these sort of things and I appreciate how you played her. Not exactly ashamed, but understandingly a little bad feeling there. I think you've got Mako pretty spot on too. Anyways thanks for making the wait between episodes a little more bearable!
kagomecathanyo chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
cool fic! i really liked it! glad i read this one...i tried reading one of the more "adult" ones the other day to see if i could get into them for this couple and...well it almost turned me off from LoK fanfiction TT glad i read this one though!