Awesome!

Ugh wow. I just have to say, I loved this fic from beginning to end. I thought the way that you wrote Christine finding out about Max and Brennan's past was perfect, and I love Michael and Christine together and ugh thank you so much beautiful person! 3

Ok, just coming back here to tell you that this is the best Michael/Christine fic ever! I always re-read it! Can you add more chapters or make another story about them after college? Or during? You are just such a great writer! :)

Please make another Christine/Michael!

I don't know why I've never considered the fact that they'd have to tell Christine all of this someday ... glad you told the story. It was really well-done. And don't apologize for it being too long. :)

I love that you have Booth using the squints' nickname for Christine. Nice touch.

Cute, could see Booth giving his daughter a nickname. Nice story overall.

Great job! They should have a baby!

Great job!

I liked it, but, Parker doesn't seem like he's 19...he acts younger...otherwise, great job!

Gosh, I love Max! Great job!

Ah, college. I liked the use of flashbacks in this chapter and it was a fitting end to the series, the next generation of squints. Thanks!

congrats on this great series - I have really loved what you did in turning Christine into such a real character.

Can't wait to read your next creation!

I don't mind long chapters. I do mind long author's notes.

As much skill and effort as you have clearly poured into this, the topic just does not fit into one chapter. It feels too mature, too quick and easy. (Yes, still.) And you layed on Max's sob story way thick!

Thank you for the read. You write well, imho; just not dialogue. That feels too precise and well-formulated, like ready for print, not like spoken language. The wording and content of everyone's speech is so readily emotionally open and mature, that it feels unrealistic, and a bit cheesy and embarrasssing to me. (But that might be a question of characterization not implementation skills.)