| Reviews for Naruto: life among the dead |
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   kurama233 chapter 2 . 9/28 ojala no la abandones |
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/28 me gusto |
| thegrison chapter 13 . 9/21 Cool story. So far as hate goes for his patents, I understand for his dad but mom should not be. She was already going to die as soon as the 9 tails fox was removed from her. Uzumakis are strong in life force that why she was alive but she knew she was going to die. She offer and begged to take the 9 tails to death with her but 4th refused. So yea why the hate for her? |
| AcidESP chapter 16 . 9/4 very good story, I hope to read the other one, greetings, see you, bye! |
| abe763 chapter 4 . 11/20/2019 too long flashback |
| Guest chapter 16 . 10/20/2019 Siguee xfaa |
| Guest chapter 15 . 5/2/2019 When are you goin to make more chapters |
| Guest chapter 16 . 12/11/2018 What an incredibly poorly written story. It is basically just canon with some fluff added. You replaced an entire character, and nothing he did even changed the plot in any way. Perfect sign of terrible writing. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/11/2018 This is so fucking childish. You're trying to make him act like a badass, but all you're doing is creating a psychotic little shit of a teenager. The whole situation is completely unrealistic, and him actually keeping Shido alive is clearly just so you can follow canon events. You're not a good writer. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/11/2018 Another person who just repeats canon. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/11/2018 Yawn. So you're just replacing Takashi with him. What a fucking joke. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/11/2018 It's painfully obvious that you're not a native English speaker so far, as the story is riddled with grammatical errors. Aside from that, you're jumping around in time constantly, and it really makes for a confusing story that doesn't allow immersion. |
| AngelKings chapter 16 . 10/23/2018 this is pretty good. few errors here and there but still good. Also to all the people that say that naruto was never physically abused is right however, this is fanfic. People make naruto gay,emo,evil,week, and a demon. If they change the story to the point where u dont know whats going on then I get it. But this is fanfic. Also of you want cannon then why the hell u reading this? its a crossover so its not going to fallow cannon. Anyway ur doing a great job so far. Keep at it and ignore all them haters. |
| R1VN chapter 3 . 10/15/2018 Rei lunged in to a group of zombies trying to save her friend her breast swaying in the wind as she does so. |
| Guest chapter 16 . 9/16/2018 this story is great I hope to read the continuation soon a greeting! chao chao! |
