There's some potential here. It starts off with a believable way for Tatsuki to find out with out the drama that she did in canon. I hope that you can keep it going from here in a believable and enjoyable fashion.

so far so good, keep it coming

WHAT THE FUCK! I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!... Ahem sorry but I really do hate them. You can't do that. Just get me so excited then jut drop it. And where you dropped it was I bit too early for a cliffhanger anyways. It wasn't enough to let me know if the story was good or not. That's like if someone brought you to the edge of sanity during intercourse and a few moments before you finish they just stop. And leave you unsatifed and frusterated. Do you understand how messed up that is?

This was a nice beginning to this story. You did not pull any punches with Tatsuki seeing Ichigo as a Shinigami in the first chapter.

Not a bad start. The pacing felt off though. It seemed a little rushed. I'd offer advice, but I haven't written anything so I wouldn't feel comfortable doing so (I'd feel pretentious). I'm still interested to see where you take this though, so keep it up.

I can't remember my logon but anyway I love ichisuki and i love you writing style can't wait to see more

loved it look forward to more! But please don't rush the romance or skip details in the fighting scenes. Explain ichigo's powers in new ways, and you have a hit