Reviews for Disney Song Challenge
Snowbeardolphin chapter 1 . 8/4/2018
I like how you did this.

If you decide to continue this maybe next song could be "Love Is An Open Door" from Frozen.

Jen
Lonesome Courier chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
Lol, laughing the whole time and probably would've ended in tears and me on the ground if I wasn't sitting! Wonderful tune, and I love how Steve was scared the entire time! However, if Steve wasn't with Kathleen, I think it would've made more sense to do him instead of Tony.
You also managed to lowercase the "t" in Tony and the "s" in Steve. When you're talking about a proper noun, it should be capitilized.
Also, whenever you have sentences like this, "My eyes are wide with fear, Tony" it should be with a comma. For example; "My eyes are wide with fear Tony," Said Steve with a look of terror. You did that on many sentences throughout the story.
I also noticed that you didn't always put a period after your sentence was finished. For example; "Can you remind me never to meet Tony at night ever again?" He asked Kathleen. This should have a period.
I also want to remind you that you did use a line directly from Disney, including the song, so next time don't forget to do a disclaimer.
Mermaid Ninja chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
Janet just won't admit that she's in love.