Sequel? This story is amazing! Brilliantly written, and the whump. Oh gods, this angst is painful yet beautiful. I'd love a sequel. Please consider.

I don't supose a sequel is in order?
I really wish there were because! This is amazing ! And I love it ! And you write wonderfully !

Omgs! Please continue! It is realllly good!

Aweeeeeee waaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!

I clicked on this on a whim, not really expecting anything and you really blew me away. I usually hate mpreg tfcs but your use of mythology made it seamless and believable, not to mention your elegant writing style and grasp of the characters. Kudos!

Poor Loki :-( What it wasn't one of the Chitauri? What if it had been Thanos? O.o One of him is bad enough but a Thanos junior too...? :-/ I don't want to think about it anymore! Lol

This breaks my heart every single time I read it.

Great, now I'm an emotional wreck again.

Perfectly portrayed, throughout the whole fic, I felt like this actually happened, the characterization was...wow O.o
Ugh, Odin. Everything is completely his fault. Denying loki of having a "supporting" father, and preventing him from being a father himself.

great fic! Id love to read banners reaction to finding out what his hulk smashing did to Loki.

Ohhhhhhh!
Poor Loki...
Terrible things do happen to Loki... I wonder if Bruce realizes that he did that... he'd most likely feel bad...
Is there a sequel one-shot? I'd be interested in reading it.

Great fic! I hate that its over!

Oh, no! Poor Loki. Oh...

*sniffles* Oh you poor thing *hugs Loki*

I'm probably a bit messed up, but while I do sometimes like happy stories, there need to be stories with all the other emotions, too. This was a very well written short story about miscarriage, past abuse, which I think added well to Loki in the movie. I hope you have similarly well written stories, or will continue to do so in the future.