Awesome story, Love the creativity in ship and plot.

*jokers slow clap from the dark night*
Beautiful Story!

Ok I'm not into Love or Romance but that was... actually really hard to resist the sweetness of story and I'm glad it didn't go step further because that's why usually I can't stand romance stories regardless this story was overall - short and sweet.

And considering how I don't like romance, it shows how this story nailed it perfectly.

Overall rating is
8/10

I feel there's room for improvement but I'm not sure how

Princess celestia and Luna has been around for thousands of years

Dark horn don't ever insult cupcakes in my presence or it will be like dbz

Not bad could be a bit more detailed other wise I thought it was great I give it a. 7/10

This story was amazing! Definitely going to be a favorite!

I love this story beyond belief. I hope you have the best of luck in you life, and romance

this was the best mlp fanfic in the word. I love the story. fluttershy best pony #babe

i love this fanfic so good

Gyjghfhvgjgvkh I LOVE THIS BOOK gfiugfifutfuitfti

FLUTTERSHY SHOULD BECOME A CHANGLING

I personally think it would have been a better idea to have darkhorn lose this one. The way the situation would have been resolved is changelings witnessing both Darkhorns actions and how Twilight felt about the situation. It would cause a stir in their nest and changelings may begin questioning the queen. Being intolerant of this behavior she would likely have them punished resulting in an uproar among the nest instead of snuffing it out as Chrysalis intended. (in smaller more metaphorical terms) The fight threatened to ignite the keg, in her paranoia Chrysalis made calls without completely thinking them through and in tun she accidentally lets loose the spark to ignite it.

holy... i love this story. i have an account that has been 'inactive' for a few years. i have always been picky about what i read. but this...wow... just wow... i want to see more of this line. please!

I like the idea of a Changeling becoming friends with the ponies, and the feeding method you portrayed in this fanfiction is marvelous, considering the circumstances. I'd like this fanfic to become a My Little Pony episode, or perhaps, a fan-made MLP short!